by silverisgold
really nice. well written, good story. not just getting straight to the point, but with interesting backstory. a well structured short story. i was hoping for more, melisa and kaitlyn getting into each other, she moves in to the house, becomes their incest daughter. a good story should make you a little sad that it ends, so you are still thinking about it later.
good job.
no caps because my left hand is greasy
Great stuff! It is really a pleasure to read such stimulating and well-written story. The length was perfect and it built to an amazing climax.
I am looking forward to reading the next instalment -- wasn't he going to offer her a job?
Keep up the good work.
Loved the story! That was Saturday. Hopefully there will be a followup chapter for Sunday.
Very good job! Looking forward to more adventures! Thank you!
Now it should be OK for wifey to bring in other men. That was her goal in the first place and to feel less guilty for cheating...
Very nice! Wife and Kaitlyn could work, or a threesome. I'll be coming back for more.
Great story and a lot of fun to read. I have to wonder though. Her comment about HIM not having another woman in 24 years made me wonder if SHE has had another man in that time. Is there more to the story?
Enjoyed the characterizations to some extent, but really got into you building up to the birthday weekend.