All Comments on 'Sometime Sweet Sheila'

Really liked your story. Too many are meet up, few kisses and 'slam bam, thank you mam. Your story is what more people should do, learning to discuss things and take it a bit slower, learning as they go. Maybe old fashion but not bad.

Keep it up.

You have a wonderful way of telling a story and building suspense. I can hardly wait for the next adventure. They should be able to build an interesting relationship, even if it turns into FWB type.

Great story, written by a thoughtful and passionate woman. Thanks so much, I really enjoyed it.

So rare. :) Great story, Ken. Your feminine side shines through on this story. Just kidding. You are a man, right? Right???? :)

Many thanks to all those who have viewed, voted, favorited, and commented. When I first laid out the basic story, I had it ending when the women said goodnight. The phone call scene the next day was added much later, and I now realize it has teed up expectations for another chapter: the sunbathing on Sunday and a return to The Regent the following weekend. Rest assured, that chapter will be written eventually; but first, I need to complete several other stories before I tackle this sequel. Your patience will be rewarded.

That was beautiful. It was both incredibly sexy and romantic. As a member of the itty bitty titty committee, I feel a lot better about myself too. It was exceedingly well written, you should consider making this your day job. As an avid reader, I'd buy your books.

Characters were very believable and situation was accurate for that time period.

Another winner, Ken

Nice slow pace. Nice dialog. Nice buildup. Looking for more.

Interesting premise.

Nicely written.

Sex scenes seem to have needed to be slower paced. Needed more details. Needed more step-by-step. For example, when she jerked him off he suggested she do it with both hands as in a scene in the movie. To me, at least, it's have been more erotic if she started with one hand for a while while he enjoyed it and she enjoyed seeing/hearing his enjoyment. Then either he or she could have suggested trying with two hands as in the movie.

Four stars.