by TheBadHatter
Loved it, even though I really don't have much of an anal fetish. But a hot story! Just wished the son could have had a crack or two at his mom's pussy too.
A HOT sensual definition of "gettin' some".....LOL!!!!!!
It's always great when a boy and his mom mess around. But I think this lady is a mean mommy. I agree with the reader who wrote "oh yeah." Why is she keeping that wonderful hairy hole between her legs from her own son? It's the same hole the kid came out of. Surely a loving caring mother would let her boy back up in there to blow his young balls in the most satisfying cum he's ever going to have. Come on, momma, spread those thighs!
In many cases, I would agree with the sentiment, but this is not one of those cases. Unless you want to have him "fuck" her, the story has indeed come to an ending. Yeah, it's splitting hairs that oral and anal aren't sex, but that was pretty much killed when she told him to fuck her ass. A second chapter would have to go past that line or be redundant to this one.
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So the story did come to an ending, it's just not the one you seem to want as opposed to the one the writer wanted.
As a writer here I often let a story end and let the reader decide about what happened afterwards. It's not laziness, and I think it adds something to the story. Invariably I get the "Can't wait for chapter 2" comments but there isn't going to be a second chapter, or else what you read would have said chapter 1. What this author does is his decision.
Let your own imagination tell the rest of the tale. Sometimes authors know that they've taken the story as far as it goes. The kid loves Mom's ass and is happy as a clam, and she likes it too. End of story. Well done.
I love multiple chapter stories, mother soon stories all the more. But this had a definite end to it.
Although I wouldn't mind if you wanted to do a sequel, they could explore more ways to be intimate.
Just a thought.
Sexy and tasty, More would be nice, but unlike a few others, I think you ended it with imagination, the reader's imagination.
Licking ass and that's of Mom is beautiful start and going to fuck is best part.
Jason with stiff cock is best for Mom.
Take her to bed every day and night
Oh my. Not sure how many of the other commenters are female (and of around that age) but this story hit a lot of the right spots with me. Not so much the incest part, but the husband's reluctance and the woman's delight when a young man "steps in".
I've had a fantasy along very similar lines for years, except with one or other of my son's hockey team-mates during an away tournament. This got me so wet when I read it last night - totally got myself off on it. Thank you!
What a great story - very arousing, honest expression of sex and closeness and very erotic !! Its a matter of time before Mom wants him to screw her pussy or do all holes in any order. Think its so great and please continue. A real winning story here. Thank you.
deserves another.
One question though. Based on what he overheard through the door, how did he know exactly what his father was not willing to do? It could have been so many different things. All of them equally as fun.
This is wonderful story, but I will be waiting on the next chapter.
Echo the "Great Work" comment, and also looking forward to continuation of the story.
Mmm, its good.My mum, in my case when she was in her early 50s, bent over for me, her anus, opening around my cock, sliding into her, spraying her gripping insides with my cum. Keeping it in the family. Always good for a quick arse fuck, even at her daughters wedding, outside, hard up against the reception wall, nailing her tight arse, she was so horny that night I watched 3 others stretch her shitter and add to my cum.
I enjoyed your story greatly. I have enjoyed the pleasure of a woman who lives, loves and breathes hot anal action constantly.they are a very rare and elusive creature. To be prized and cherished.
Thank you for this story.
Oooo Boy!!!
Delicious story, thank you.
WTF, Is this the same moron anon trolling all the stories that include anal and spewing that it's gay?? I bet he loves being pegged. This was an enjoyable (short) read. I gave this funny and erotic (short) story 5 stars!! (10/19/29021)
I would love for you to continue this storyline, this a beautiful Storyline
Yeah, you know what, that was pretty hot.
There is a special relationship between a 18 + boy and his pre menopausal mom.
I LOVED this story. It was real & hot. Ok, I'm a guy & I do love eating a woman ass.
Too bad there isn't another part to this cause it was good. I would've loved to have it progress to full on sex and everything goes with them!!!
This was sexcellent to read. Mom was clearly a HOTTIE and was missing out on what dad wouldn't give her. Lucky son...I'd have given all of that to her too.
And this does need a follow-up.