All Comments on 'Sophia's Choice Pt. 01'

Excellent start. Hot.

Well written narrative but the innuendos about the previous nanny left me a little unsettled as to where their marriage stands and who’s doing what to whom. 4*

Eleanor put on hold (or not), and back with Sophia. She is truly intriguing, so imperfect yet how can you not like/maybe love her — at least wonder what the hell she is doing/thinking. Why because you write her so well. This piece, which I thought might be the start of something a bit darker as you mentioned, starts off odd, yet predictable — a continuation. I digress — well written. I am curious.

Blondes have more fun!

4

What a lovely start to the new series.

"'Ready?' asked Peter, raising an eyebrow in the manner of Roger Moore." I haven't laughed so much in ages.

Thank you, Alice, for bringing back my favourite character on Literotica. I can't wait to see whether Petsi is an ice maiden or not, and whether Sophia checks out if Ulf is man enough for her au pair or not!

Bloody hilarious! Keep it coming!

Best story I've read on LW in ages. Can't wait for more of this great mix of eroticism and humour.

Very predictable. Im sure the stroke artists will love your story as they love your other stories. But you need to change the record. You are getting repetitive.

WHOA BOY! Sophia's back. Lock up your sons!

...and your daughters!!

When doing the role play you really need to identify Sophia not Petsi. It was Sophia playing Petsi was it not? And does this really belong in the Lesbian category? There was a large bit of penis involved. That and the choppiness of the narrative. Not a fan as others seem to be.

You've made an old (married) man feel young again. THank you, Alice.

“ Prepare to receive my seed!” Too silly by far.

If you're concerned about sexual innuendos, you might be reading the wrong website!

Sophia worked on his penis the way she imagined Petsi would the first time she got to make love with Peter"

You have got to admire / marvel at / be astounded by the way this woman lets her husband have his end away with the hired help. One of her criteria for choosing their domestic would appear to be the likelihood of her being seduced by her husband.

If this is a true reflection of modern London, I may wellhave to relocate...

Oops category is right! Reader was wrong. Apologies. Came to it from following and that doesn't give a category.

Sophia’s Choice can now be found under Erotic Couplings, as she heads for some adventures in Italy. Without hubby, who she still loves very much.

Lol , I love it when I get a laugh and an erection the same time , it rarely happens for me as it’s usually the chick who is laughing when I have an erection , so thanks for that .