All Comments on 'Stacey Ch. 01'

to find a story with well-written and very human characters, insight, and a great, slow build of sexual tension. There are few stories on Lit that have left me eager to read more when a chapter ends. This is one.

My only quibble (and it's just that) would be the relatively long "revelations" scene which could benefit from a little more description of the characters' physical reactions (shifted uneasily, looked away, blushed, etc.) as the truth comes out. That scene seems detached from the treatment of the rest of the story.

Great job! Please continue.

This has the begginings of an excellent series. Please continue with your fine work. I am eagerly looking forward to the next chapter and I hope that it continues for quite a long time.

I've enjoyed all of your stories so far. I'm interested to see where this will lead. However, all 3 pages got chopped off.

What a beautiful friendship Dan and Stacey have. I see you're building us up to something and I'm excited for what it might be. I'm only sad that Angelina is gone.

Keep up the good work!

I just lost my wife and I wish to hell I had a Stacey....

I'm loving the "Awakening" in this story! I must say that it started dark enough to make me almost walk away. But after reading your other stories I had to see it through! You previous body of work gave me faith that this would be worth the read! An I'm loving the story to this point! I'm looking forward to the next chapter and any future stories you write!

and interesting plot. I really wish I had a Stacey! I can just see her from the author's description. Her planned procedure with Chris as a third does not sound good to me.

But that is the author's prerogative. Please note eight years between chapters leaves me wondering..

Fun and well written.

I would love to meet Stacey!

I am surprised that there are so few comments about this engaging and entertaining 5 star story