All Comments on 'Staid Wife to Slut Wife Ch. 01'

Your LW story sucks

Constructive criticism from the d**khead before me i see. Nice story so far. Language is good and the story have the possibility to be really good. Keep it up

Really looking forward to see how this one pans out - more soon please!

Don't let the haters stop you! This is a very nice start to what I hope is a longer series of stories, thanks.

Submissive wife is seldom seen in LW, and this one is welcomed. Her narrative voice and deep passion hooked me to want to see more of her. Keep writing this in LW please. 5*****

Fabulous! Love the fact that a wife has the realization that she actually craves the life of a slut. The fact that she is also a respectable lady with a good job makes it even sexier. I love it! So many wives would benefit from something like this happening to them.

Her husband can't make all of her fantasies come true if he doesn't know them and if he does all her holes, her cherry red beat ass and pussy and tits will belong to him! It takes two and in todays world she better tell what she wants and needs or he goes to jail. Women got more than equality A few women like it but most need the man to take charge of sex and how their life moves without police or hospitalization! So the pendulum swings!!

I do dig your work . Keep them coming....

nothing was erotic in part one. a dumb wife who just needs a couple drinks to get fucked by the most obvious jerk from her company and a husband who lost all respect and therefore love towards his wife.

and now you have a happy marriage ? beeing the fucktoy for men and a possible aids nominee?

so it took 10 years and now you opened a whorehouse instead of a family, good luck because I never heard or read about an old happy whore or pornstar.

Perhaps it is the Yank in me, but I found the elaborate use of British slang off-putting (sorry...had to do it!) I would recommend a more 'vanilla' (oops, there it is, again!) or Generic English vocabulary.

I DID enjoy the non-(LW)-typical admission of female submissiveness! Not really my cup of tea (end of that shit!) but a little difference never hurts.

You did it again Nat, yet another brilliant story with really believable characters in real situations, it nice to see the origins of a slut, from dull housewife to horny submissive slut and great pacing too

I'd like to see how far her husband will push her into submissiveness, and to what are her other fantasies, and will she get to enjoy them, along with what ever her husband can come up with.

Thanks for the read.

Really hot! Keep up the good work

Really enjoyed this. Loved the way it developed and how shocked each of the pair were at what they were doing and how far they would go. Very erotic.

is that he fucks you? And exposes himself to all the lovely social diseases? And accepts that you're a cheating slut? Well that just doesn't make sense. Failed story.

I'm fascinated so far, so I'll cut this short to see where Natalie's fantasy takes us. Fun read so far. Keep up with your effort and don't ever take that commentator named anonymous seriously.

This story touches on many complex issues in today's society. As an Aikido Master and longtime Dom, I can assure you that Natalie has touched on something deep in human nature and newly pervasive within our society. While I fully support women as equal human beings within our society, including the right to pursue what ever professional interests or job titles they may wish, and should be paid equally for said work, at the end of the day many are finding great truth in concepts like the ones contained in this story. It is an engineering fact that form follows function, and function follows form. This is true in human beings as well. Beginning at the DNA level to include our gender, our height weight and build, mental abilities, the environment in which way we grew up, etc. etc. etc. All of this combines, along with our temperament and experiences, along with other factors such as our core beliefs and values, to create who we are. While this is an extremely complex issue, changing our profession, our title, and other things in our life does not change who we really are. As such, I believe it is a foolish and self defeating mistake to run from this truth. Be who you are. Live, love, and pursue life in your own way, and on your own terms. God bless.

Shite.

First, anons are narrow minded children who are too afraid of opening their eyes to life's possibilities. In addition they are drive by cowards so weak that they have to hide behind anonymous comments.

In my option, every woman who has the slightest desire to be submissive to their mate should read this story before she is married and then after she reads it she should ask her fiancée to read it. If it is not in him to give her what she needs she would be advised to keep looking for the man who will treat her as she needs.

I spelled option instead of opinion

Loved the first instalment, well constructed story and getting hornier and hornier with each page. Looking forward to reading more

A slut wife is every Dom's dream - a cunt who is prepared to go wherever he chooses to take her.

I look forward to future instalments.

should be your title! He's just too stupid to know it! If the sex was so bad in their marriage than get a divorce!

Fine beginning ! I am eager to continue reading the saga about Natalie's sexual evolution. Good work !

You filthy girl, I love slut wife stories, jono14 x

I question the mental health of people who like this type story.

What fun a wife like this could be. As long as that is what she wants. I can't wait to hear the full depth and breadth of her desires. This is what Loving Wives is meant for. Very hot and what I read LitEROTICA for.

Superb, nicely written - 5 stars

Very nice - hot sex and detailed writing!