by staceyshackleton
I really enjoy your writing style and I enjoyed both of your new submissions. Keep it up!
Well done, loved the plot, characterization and writing. A shy reserved woman's discovery of the pleasure of showing off. The idea of a dare and giving control to someone by telling them a secret really work. Maybe the opportunity for many more chapters?
You should find out the difference between it's and its. You are wrong in every case.
What you do is breathe; what you take is a breath.
Fantastic! Can't wait to see what happens next. More excited for next dress off... But I can hardly complain about this!