All Comments on 'Steph's Descent Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Stupidity runs amok

This just wasn't clever or entertaining.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Wrong anatomy

I'm sorry, but incorrect anatomy is a huge pet peeve.

Getting a tattoo above her vagina would be a hell of a trick, considering it is an international cavity. What you mean is mons pubis, or just pubis for short.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Stupid premise.

If she's been faking and her marriage is good, her friends first suggestion unanimously would be to stop faking and talk it out with hubby.

Duh.

Not impressed with the rest of the first chapter either.

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