by MarshalMarmont1815
An interesting story ! Very arousing as his real Mom is screwing him well and now after just meeting his new step-Mom she is too. She wants her step-son to get her pregnant !! His real Mom does not object as long as he takes care of her; interesting.
Some physical details about his real Mom and step-Mom would help get a better picture of what they look like and offer a comparison. Yes, we need more arousing chapters, thank you.
Story written by a first grader. No editing at all. Words left out, wrong words in some places. Parts of the story left out. Story itself had no "meat" to it. Story line...
Don't even know why I read further after the first section. Guess I wanted to see just how much it could fail to impress my literary side.
good but when did Kyle get a girlfriend if this is a sequel to the first one where he asked his mom to marry him., it's good buy it's self
I don't mind the sex but how does the dad do this shit? How does he trick these hot ass women into getting into sexless, loveless marriages with him?
What is this, some kind of cut and paste? what garbage, no structure or rationalised characters bouncing all over the place and locations