All Comments on 'Story of Priyanka, the Slut Ch. 01'

5 for your effort and because you pissed off dear annony!

it is never about originality of plot. It is always about how well you carry the story. For me personally, the story did the trick. ;)

5 star's. I wish I could give you more.

like all you guys commenting can even write an actual erotic story.

just enjoy it and keep it pleasant.

The only question is. If the husband liked that she was and behave as a slut, why was she worried in the beginning that he could arrive and found her fucking his brother? 2*

The reason of her getting ready was not being afraid that her husband will discover. The reason is something else, the reason will open up in the coming chapters.

The plot is so nicely depicted in an erotic way, I was really lost in their lust for sex and was imagining my wife in Priyankas place . Superb the author and the story deserve 5 star ratings.My wife also read the story and praised the author.

Suresh and Aruna

we absolutely loved your writing

tum sabke liye likhte ho, mere ko chod ke. mere liye bhi likho na.

please na.

Update

wow.. the story feels like a real life event ,very awesome and realistic. esp. the narration of the thoughts and action is very vivid. awaiting the update of this 'priyanka' episode . Glad that you are writing and we are able to read your works . - Ankur

Post ur next episode or quit writing.. asshole you need 3 months to post next part of the series ah

do you think your comment will inspire the guy to write further?

this writer has no creativity he writes till he jerks off and after that he forgets his fantasy big time looser asshole

Loved it. No other words for it :)

Love your plot and narration. Where are the sequels dude?

The worst on this site ! "1*" !!

for bonnie/vastie.

i wish it was longer, but this was a great read..... thank you

What a superb story and plot. Husband asking wife if chance arise will you bed with somebody?

And that's with brother in law?

And during sex she answers his name.

Priyanka, you are like my wise brahmin wife and you too are. Ready to expand your life and cunt.

My wife also did such mission and it was ended on bed not once but many more times.

Priyanka is really bold enough to express her feelings towards another male of her choice. How many Indian women get such a chance?

strtrl69 started the story in medias res. After that the story line jumps back to the moment Rakesh & Priyanka met for the first time.

The scene where Rakesh is eavesdropping on Priyanka & Rahul was PRICELESS!

The story is 100% REALISTIC. In real life things unfold exactly as in this story.

Rakesh is obsessively infatuated with Priyanka. She would like to sleep with him but she does not want to jeopardize her marriage.

I got the vibes from Ch. 1 that Rahul has a strong voyeur/cuck-wannabe side, of which he is not fully aware because it probably is dormant.

Looking forward to reading Chapters 2 & 3.

Hi strtrl69:

As of today i am your fan.

Buddy - loved your comment. Glad you appreciated the writing so much. Means a lot as a writer to me.

Share your chat id so we can connect as well

Priyanka is a keeper. Period.

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Loved this story.

I gave you a 5 [4.75 = 95% = A+ (☆☆☆☆☆)].