All Comments on 'Story Time Ch. 03'

Very erotic story, loved it!

I enjoy the element of relationship in this- the sex is hot, but what I remember is the café- enjoying each other. Thanks!

Another terrific piece. I can't wait for Chapter 4...

I really like this story and hope you write another chapter!

I am reasonably certain most readers of the Erotic Couplings section are not men. That being said, I am a hopeless romantic and have enjoyed this story more than mere words can express. I too like the relationship story line and actually breeze over some of the hot scenes to see where the relationship is going, saving the hot scenes for a later re-read. I look forward to ensuing chapters. Well written, good story line and well edited. Excellent!

I especially liked the switching from Kate to James. I know you're a female writer, but you did capture the male perspective. Slow down and resist the temptation to be impaled too quickly.

I, too, liked the Cafe sequence.

This is very exciting story. The best of the series

Another stupid telling a story as it happens script. Lousy writing!

I love this story almost as much as I love the characters within it. I adore each time you write about how James looks at Kate lovingly -- it is just so sweet!

P.S. Don't listen to the jerk who left a comment before me saying that your story is lousy. He/she wouldn't know a good story if it came up and bit him in the ass!

This series is a perfect depiction of new relationship energy. Ahhh how well I remember... That constant need to fuck and suck and cum, all the while high on love. Each moment apart is an eternity! Too bad it fades after a few months. But while it lasts... Pure heaven!

Great writing - the story is engaging and the sex excellent. It's enough of a build up to make you want to read more about these two. Probably one of the best I've read. Well done.

Logging in is just too dull for words. Yes, well, enjoyed your story but I have to say that I have never ever had a conversation about a girl like your character, James, did with his flatmates. So you could get all defensive and say 'Well that's just you' but really, I don't think it is. Anyway, still enjoyed your story!

Please continue!

Very satisfying read: good pace, tempo and well-crafted rhythmic alternations between warmth and heat all combine to great effect. Brava! Molto bene fatto.

You have captured the falling in love excitement and urgency exceptionally well and I became lost in their story. The added dimension of being in close confines with Tina and Mike in the apartment gave the story an additional edge that made it more real and sexy. Thank you. If only there were more stories like yours to read and enjoy.

From dream to reality! Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading more of your work. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.