- Incest/Taboo
- Subjects 0 Ch. 04
- Comments
All Comments on 'Subjects 0 Ch. 04'
by Dark_Brother
- 9 Comments
Anonymousover 12 years agoI still like this story and find the whole premiss original. I also know it is fantasy. Having said that, I really got lost when Adam took both his girlfriend and sister. It could be that I have never had more than one partner at a time, but I just couldn't picture how he was able to accomplish what he did unless he is a contortionist. Again, I know this is fantasy and my comment is not a criticism, in fact it really made me think. I think that's what sexual fantasy should do, challenge us. So yes I gave you five stars and look forward to seeing what happens once "Subject Bravo" is added to the mix.
Anonymousover 12 years agoWhy are there no more direct "Found Sister" stories? Just references to the characters in the other two series.
The %^&*'n sleazy doctor in this story has to get killed off somehow. His vileness is complete, and his status reports are getting really old.
LordSlamdawggover 12 years agoKEEP the status reports! How could this be porn if their Status Report headings here, afterall.
DarkAngelJLover 12 years agoJust love the way you wrote all your stories but then integrated them. Extremely clever. Keep them coming, I looking forward for the next chapters
Anonymousover 12 years agoi like the mix of the 3 story lines but i gotta say harold using the substance for rape is a major turn off. starting to get the feeling that another story would be a better read.
Anonymousover 12 years agoEnjoyed the story so far, but I really hope Harod get punished before he can do any more damage...
Anonymousover 8 years agoAnyone else notice that there's mentions of Jason and Jenny, from Broken Bliss, which was also written by Dark_Brother? Also, one of the three girls that almost hooked up with Harold was named Shanna. Not sure, but could be the same Shanna from Bait and Switch? Even if I'm wrong, Dark_Brother was an incredibly talented writer, and for that, he has my utmost respect, even in the afterlife. Rest in peace, Dark_Brother, may your work never be forgotten.
linnearalmost 5 years agoIt's getting a bit crowded and I could do without the fisting. I still think this is a very good series, I'm hoping Harold gets taken down soon.
