All Comments on 'Submission Ch. 14'

This is a well developed story series; worth the effort to read this author.

He/she continues to publish good literotica!

I have read this author for years; he/she always measures up to my expectations!

---josiemr

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With every new chapter, the writing has gotten progressively better and better, although I did notice that in a sense there is no plot to this particular story, it just consists of the daily life of David and Alanna. Overall, the story keeps getting better and the characters continue to become more personable.