All Comments on 'Suburban Sweetheart Ch. 04'

Just what we've come to expect from this superb writer, hot, hot hot!!

Loved it, oc. The tempo and pace are excellent, the vocabulary imaginative and gripping, the scenario so real. Keep on writing!!

Is it a dream? How did the pair get from the train to a bed? Gven that they "performed" in a crowded train, it must be fanntasy. Pity that was not explained

...how I love such finely crafted descriptions of lusciousness! Fluid, intricately detailed-- I savour your work like a delicious sweet and relish every mouthful (!). Your work is a joy to read-- may there be lots more of it!

Mahbebe

How can you end this so soon when this can go on for a while? Please continue it. Loved this series.

Thanks Florbust. Maybe i will revisit them. Maybe they will meet on another train