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by gaonkaloha

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Just 3 sentences

Your story could have been written in just 9 words.

He entered the room. He entered her. He came.

LustyScribeLustyScribeover 3 years ago
I thought it was great!

Very hot, captured all the emotions of the encounter, and it was well-written. Thanks for sharing this!

NaynaNaynaover 3 years ago
Amazing description

Very hot description. Your use of language was perfectly matched to the theme. Keep writing. Many like me would eagerly learn from your use of descriptions.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Nicely written

One of the better written proses in Indian erotica I have ever read!

WildErotica69WildErotica69over 1 year ago

Hot first encounter - captured the mood nicely.

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I started browsing literotica at a tender age and the minds of wonderful authors moulded and matured me. Being given a chance to enter what is a very private world opened my eyes to a range of emotions and possibilities. Each new author adds to this wealth and expands our hori...