by loveflame
The story is quite good from the view point of Indian standard.
First the negative point: Mother's sister is aunt and commiting sex with your aunt is considered to be incest. Being placed in Mature category it did not get readers' attention it deserved, in incest category, this story would have got wider publicity.
The actual sexual act started abruptly. It was expected to be gradual.
Good thing: The command of English is of very high standard.
Keep writing, you write well.