All Comments on 'Summer Of Discovery Ch. 03'

Wonderful story!!!! I must find the previous chapters!!

I love the mind dialogue between Mel and Mark; it's so erotic and exciting.

Your detail is great.......a real boner maker. :)

Please continue, I'm looking forward to the four of them getting together.

Could they all be bi?? Not necessary,,,but the mind reading could sure produce some amazingly erotic encounters if they all tried experimenting with same sex.

This is quite an interesting idea. Having a helpful partner giving clues, or being able to know what another person is thinking could avoid a lot of heartbreak. I'm looking foreward to what occours next!

I've read all three chapters of this story, and it rocks! It's truly original, and has a great premise. Don't let it end here! More, Please!!!!

Youe story keeps building and building with sexual excitment!