by shywriterguy
last statement in your story is absolutely idiotic, considering todays testing abilities. Ben may be quite minus on the intelligence side, but even he should have enough smarts to ask for a test.
All three of them are braindead twats. Imagine what the child is going to like?
I thought it was a great story, would like to se you write more. Thank you, Oldfart4fun
The ending could have been drawn out a bit better. It was just chopped off.