All Comments on 'Surprise Father'

by shywriterguy

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
That

last statement in your story is absolutely idiotic, considering todays testing abilities. Ben may be quite minus on the intelligence side, but even he should have enough smarts to ask for a test.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Does it matter who the father is?

All three of them are braindead twats. Imagine what the child is going to like?

YusakuYusakuover 14 years ago
Very erotic

Great stuff, please keep writing!

oldfart4funoldfart4funover 14 years ago
Very Good!!

I thought it was a great story, would like to se you write more. Thank you, Oldfart4fun

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Good start

The ending could have been drawn out a bit better. It was just chopped off.

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