All Comments on 'Swati Ch. 01'

Nicely written, made for enjoyable reading.

I would have liked to see a more gradual build up of the actual act though, given the painstakingly long introduction.

Its a slow story, but the sex act seems to be rushed.

Whatever the other's say, I liked the long introduction, and also liked the way you got quickly to business with the sex part.. keep up the great work!

Lovely Swati .... make her more she needs harsh love

I do not know why I am writing it so late after reading it...This is one of the best that I have read at literotica. The beauty of the narration, the buildup and the culmination of the act is fantastic. Of the entire series, this story never goes out of my mind and after a few months or years, keep revisiting this first chapter. Well done. Keep writing!

I really appreciate your comments. I hope you will enjoy my other stories too.