All Comments on 'Take Off My High Heels'

good read keep it up

Nice start. I would like to see where this goes

Like a true male he just pushed is cock in and shot his cum deep up inside her unprotected pussy

would there be a sequel to the story i would like one very much.

That's show business!

Lovely little meet cute what's insane is that so many erotic stories start as meet, greet, sex, baby, marriage. Please allow these characters to develop and have a connection before it just blahs out. The interesting thing is you can create anything you like, but and there's a but you can turn this into a masterpiece by not falling into the habits of many. Allowing the story to flourish shows the difference between your regular smegular story and a well thought out experience.