by Goldeniangel
Seeing the protagonists point of view adds depth to the story.
In some cases I'm actually more interested in the anti-hero's motivation. The hero or heroine is often responding to events that happen to them but the bad guy or girl? Why do they do it? Now there's the real story.
Please, please, please give Jordan's POV! Rounds the whole story out.
I love that you added Jordan's POV! I hope you continue with it in future chapters!
And I also like Trisha acknowledges her weakness. Many stories I read infuriate me and lead to disappointment because the writer makes the female weak, pathetic, and in denial. Here Trisha at least acknowledges her weakness.
She is going to flip out that he has been stalking her but then she's never been cared for like this. But kidnapping and force isn't love... maybe obsession, but not love. But then again, it might be more feeling than she's experienced before.
Looking forward to seeing where you take this.
This is even better than the Wolf. Love Jordan's POV. Rock on with your wonderful story telling.
Absolutely fabulous! Wolf one of my all time favs, and you as an author, again, favorited. Excellent book 2 to go with the Wolf!
Blessings and Thank you,
EroticallyWicked
No, I need my own Viking. Excellent writing, as always, and very, very sexy.