by Goldeniangel
A bit short. Would have liked more. I've come to expect long chapters from you. But altogether really good. Can't wait for more to come out!!!
Yummy yum yum! This is such an unusual story, I love it! Dastardly, dark and dangerous, what more can you ask for?
That rat bastard. He put them through all that just to take her anyway.. but I expected it to say the least
U r so talented. I love this just as much as ur other works. Thanks for a great read. Cant wait for more :-)
This is the first series of yours that I've read. I love the psychological torment and darkness that you've set up. I'm greatly anticipating the next twisted part of this journey. Great job. Thanks for sharing it with us.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
I am really going to need you to write faster. The suspense is killing me.
lol, next chapter was submitted on Tuesday. I'm going with shorter chapters so that I can get them in faster and I'm already about 3/4 of the way through writing Chapter 4.
Glad to hear it.
This is well and truly up to your usual standard.
Excellent writing
My enjoyment is growing as I make my way through the chapters of this tale.
Hot ... love the anticipation you build. Looking forward to more ... 😆