All Comments on 'Taken by the Wolf Ch. 27'

Brilliant!! I thoroughly enjoyed this story, thank you!

What an incredible end to your story! You have such a deft and subtle hand when it comes to your plot and characters. This was a wonderful end. Thank you.

I loved it! I don't know what else to say about this chapter except for the fact that I love how it ended. I can't believe how much of a liking the wolf took to bella but it seemed fitting. I also liked how much they grew from their experience with the wolf and how they came together to create something better.

Just thank you for a wonderful story.

as everyone else you have a gift and this was an amazing story ,, im sorry it finished but you did an amazing job of properly ending the story impressed ..... i certainly am..... your an author i shall watch out for thank you for your time spent on creating such a beautifully scripted piece of writing xxx

So well done, from beginning to end. So many of the best stories leave such a bittersweet feeling when they are done. It ends the way it should, and I'm happy for them, and yet a bit sad as well. This one will stick with me for quite a while. Bravo.

This has been one of the best written stories on Lit ty u so much for sharing it with us. Plz continue ur writing it is first class and a pleasure to read ty.

Really enjoyed all aspects of the story. Got off to each chapter.

You are a legend. Thanks so much for this intriguing series of lust and mind-fuck brilliance. Bella and Alex were superb with special mentions for Jordan and Trish.

I love love LOVE that you write so much. I get so invested in your stories, and I reread them very often. Thank you for yet another wonderful piece of work!

I really really enjoyed this story so much! The characters grabbed me in and I fell in love with them!! Thanks so much for all the writing you do I really love reading your stories! So pulling from Oliver, can I have some more please????!!! I'd so love some more of Wolf there's just something about him what can I say I want him to have an HEA:). Thanks again for the wonderful story!

Jen

I really like how you ended this. Especially with the Wolfs secret longing for Bella. It's always bitter sweet to say goodbye to characters and good stories, but that just means that now we can look forward to more stories from you. Well done

Thank you for a lovely series. I hope to hear more about Tr ish and Jordan as well Alex and Bella and how they are faring on the new colony.

It to so sad for it to come to an end...but I loved it all.....can't wait for your next story...

Just Wow !

Wow That is all I can say about the way this tale ended. You made the characters so real that it seemed that I actually felt what they felt and that I was participating in their actions and living in their story. I am sad that you are ending this story but I also understand how much work was involved in writing this tale.I just want you to know that you made this readers life much more enjoyable by writing this story and its many chapters. Thank so much for this submission. Redbeard/Bill

At times during your story, there was a lot of critic. The story being too dark, being dragged out too long, being repetitive etc...

Those who have read all chapters, all up to the end... love it or hate it, but i don't believe anyone can deny you're a great writer. And I'm among those who say, with conviction, that this is a great story and a fantastic end.

Thank you.

For the last month and a half I've used this site and your stories to escape the fact that my Grandmother was dying of Cancer. She passed today and I found myself opening this site once more and here, was the final chapter.

Wonderfully sweet and so perfect.

Your story helped me through many hours of sadness.

My Grandmother is no longer in pain. Now Bella and Alex are free! *smiles*

You have a true gift of delivering interesting and intriguing erotic stories. Thank you xx

*smiles*

Thank you so very much for a wonderful ending to an amazing storyline. You took us to a variety of places without ever making us feel like you were repeating the exact same scene over and over again. You gave us subtle as well as explosive mind fucks that left me (at least) in a whirl. Thank you for taking us on this journey with Bella and Alex. i truly hope that you will allow us a glimpse of how they are all doing in their respective lives. *grins* Keep up the amazing writing and i look forward to your next submission.

BRILLIANT! :)

Once again I must say you are one of the finest and best of the best here on Literotica!!! Kudos on a truly inspired story... your imagination is to be admired! Here's hoping that one day your work will be published for mainstream reading enjoyment... YES, I feel it is that good!!!!

This chapter sounded final, but I do hope you will continue the saga(s) of Alex and Bella, the Wolf, Jordan and Trish... PLEASE!!!

A huge fan,

MJB

BRAVO!!!!!

Your stories are unfailingly thoughtful, well plotted, and hot as hell. I loved this series. Thanks for generously providing your fans many satisfying hours of reading!

I loved it! Loose ends tied up, a satisfying ending (though I was hoping for some torture for Ken and his father). Very enjoyable!

Thanks for writing it!

It was so good! I know Scott's like 99.9% evil, but he was such an interesting character. Could we have an Origins of The Wolf series???? lol I don't want it to be over. Noooooooo. :oP

...and stories like these are the reason why. The writing, the fascinating storyline, and, of course, all those HOT scenes. Fantastic!

I finished this whole series in one day and it gave me chills constantly. I love it, a terrific plot and very well written characters! The ending was amazing but of course I want to know more about The Wolf (the submissive in me couldn't get enough of him!)

I absolutely binged on reading this story and I have loved the ride so much! The way you wrapped the subplot in through each chapter and built towards an ending that was so satisfying for the readers - GAH! Just amazing! I also love that Bella and Alex accepted the sides of themselves that the Wolf drew out, because that's hot. Really. Not sure how I feel about Lisa getting to hang out with the Wolf, in a twisted way I feel like he deserves better than some greedy tramp, but I know he's not perfect so maybe they deserve each other. I just can't say enough how much I loved the story and the scenes and ALL of it! Thank you for writing it!

You mentioned if you let it go and it comes back its true love...blahblah...they didn't actually return to the wolf.....kind of anti climatic for me. Though I know the Wolf was evil...but....hmmm well anyways.....AWESOME...

Interesting plot, great characters, and plenty of fun times - who could ask for more? I particularly enjoyed the Wolf messing with Alex, physically and mentally :-)

Loved this story I am slowly working my way through all your stories but this is one of my favourites loved the plot and the characters

Thoroughly enjoyed it!

You took the comment out of context, he was speaking of Lisa, not Bella and Alex. Pay attention when you read.

I thoroughly enjoyed every part of this story, thank you for your beautiful writing!

I just wanted to thank you for a great weekend of reading. I just love your writing and look forward to reading many more of your stories. I think these were some of my favorite characters although I wish that Wolf could have been just a bit more redeemable. I thought he could have explained his extremist approach with Alex and Bella as a way to ensure their ability to fight the memory erasing drugs with such stronger memories. I also was a bit thrown by his hidden feelings for Bella when his obsession seemed to be more focussed on Alex. Regardless I loved your ending and would love to see a sequel. I just need to restock my electronic boyfriends batteries before hand. I'm afraid I wore them all out! Oh... Did I mention how damn hot the sex was? WOW!!!

How about they go back to Earth n visit WOLF???? LOL I want more

I loved it. All of it. From start to finish: amazing. You're truly an awesome author with great stories, and the finale of this series is mind blowingly apt and satisfying. I love how they regain their memories and how in the end there's almost like a reconciliation between all the characters, even the Wolf and his former captives. Loved this story, along with 'Submission', and I'm probably off to read another series of yours.

So good. I'm shocked it didn't get 5's all the way thru. Maybe some were turned off by the m/m stuff but I loved it all.

Amazing story. Your characters and your world was wonderfully interesting and had great depth. The sex was hot and thrilling. I loved it.

Jesus christ, that last sentence fucked me up the arse so hard...

Thank you.

Evebroughtanaxthistime

It was a brilliant story, well laid out but by god you have a terrifying imagination. Some of the situations you dreamt up are kind of terrifying to the point that it wasn't sexy our hot, just rape. Still, very well written and I do love the end, though maybe would have enjoyed Bella getting some token revenge on the Wolf.

I have been coming back to this story for I don't know how many times, and I enjoy it like the first time I read it. Shame that it is not possible to rate a whole series at once; it would definitely get 5 stars. Really like your other stuff, too.

Callie

I'm with another comment I saw, wish I could rate the whole story. You did amazingly and that finish was probably the most satisfying thing I have read in ages. I thank you a thousand times for sharing with with us.

I am so pleased with this whole story, it totally captivated my heart. Five stars isn't enough for how much I love Alex and Bella

I initially thought this story was going to be about werewolves but after reading the first chapter I was hooked...I finished the whole series in a day. I love you as an author and I think your other stories are fantastic but this one in particular had me needing to leave a comment so that you would know how utterly amazing you are. You've been blessed with a gift my friend!

Marvelous!

... and the ending ...

more than 5 stars!

Marvelous!

While I also developed Stockholm Syndrome by the end of this--this last chapter totally fucked me over. I had my suspicions that Wolf felt attached to Bella and I really don't understand why everyone is so surprised. It was there, you just did a fucking good job of subtly hiding it in your writing. Fucking applause.

I've never commented on Literotica before, but I had to after reading this series. I found it in a search, about what I can't remember. I'm glad I found it and your other writings that I plan to read. You're a very good writer and you write very good stuff. Thank you for the posts. Super hot and erotic writing.

From start to finish I was captivated! And secretly wanted to be Bella;) the writing was outstanding, and the nuance of love that The Wolf had for Bella touched me. The last sentence actually brought tears to my eyes!

Again, Bravo!

I loved everything about this story!! Captivated from start to finish.

I was hooked from the beginning.

Absolutely superb.

Thank you.

Excellent! I've read the entire series, I love the variety of the scenes and the excellent writing in each of the chapters. I like where all the characters ended up. Good appropriate endings for everyone.

Your story had me from the beginning to the end. You have a natural talent and I thank you for sharing it with the rest of us!!!!!

I have read a lot of stories on here and this is one of the most amazing stories ive read. Please continue to write other stories and expand.

This is one of the best stories I've read on here. Wish you had a better editor, but even grammar police are forgiving when the story is this good. You are absolutely a wordsmith.

I am glad I found this through the Trish storyline, very well done great twists and great finish, Thanks

Well done!

So much. I loved this story to the moon and back ;)

Only read this chapter because I’ve been reading the parallel story (TBTV) and quit at Ch.20 (am sure people can see why I quit when I did if anyone cares).

However because I was interested in the plot too I wanted to find out what the conclusion was. Love the irony the the sadistic jerk ends up with a pain slut and isn’t content.

Agree with Bella that I think Trish needs therapy too, after all even though he gave her a ‘choice’ he was clearly not taking no for an answer.

This is the best story I've ever read. It is beautiful in a way no other author has ever been able to covey a story.

The ending is so amazing that I cried.

I love the the way you wrote the Wolf's character, (and everyone else's too) it is very realistic and yet has that fantasy elements that prevents it from being a horror story where a guy kidnaps and rapes people.

I wish I had the word to express my gratitude and fascination with this story but I don't.

aka Goldeniangel. You set the standard of excellence beyond the grasp of most mere mortals. The action never slows, the characters always ring true, the dialog and language always spot on, -- and the conclusion was as perfect and satisfying one could ever want.

The intriguing plot was outstanding. Makes me think you were sorta making an activist statement of sorts. Aahhh, maybe not.

PS: And you always finish your stories. Bravo!

This is by far the best story I have found on here. I have never made beyond chapter 3 in a series before, but this I couldn't put down and was so sad when it ended!

Please, please keep writing more!!

Incredible. Absolutely incredible. From beginning to end, this story was perfection.

Favourite stories by far on here. Beautifully written and easy to get lost in imagination and visualisations. Thank you and definitely keep writing.

Best story I have read. Should be a book and movie. Or tv series. Original characters and plot. I have read many books over the years and I like this one. Thank you for refreshing ideas 💡

Okay so I just binged this whole story in.... three days? Give or take? I can't remember bc I read straight through the nights. This story was goddamn incredible, and not just for the (incredibly effective) erotic scenes