All Comments on 'Tantric'

Editor, take note!

"My curiosity was peaked." (para. 6)

not peaked but..

Pique:

stimulate (interest or curiosity).

"you have piqued my curiosity about the man"

Perhaps he had simply reached the "peak" of his curiousity???

"Jade helped me to undress fully and very gently she guided me to lay on the pillowed floor."

No. She guided you to lie on the pillowed floor.

For chrissake quit nit-picking and enjoy the story.

It's a good one !