by ssnatch
stupid thing to include in a erotica web-site
I can't wait to see where you'll take future chapters!
This story is SO hot!! Just left a big load in my pants here... keep it up!! Chapter 2?!
really great buildup. Please write another installment with the same pacing.
This was great. Well-written and incredibly hot. It just ended too soon. I hope you write more.
Usually, I would call this long-winded, but you have me on the edge of my seat. I jump every time she barks at him, lolol. I'm ready for part two, just lemme catch my breath.
Almost every male teachers fantasy taken to the nth degree. Very sexy.
You've taken a difficult fantasy topic - how does a young girl come to dominate an older guy in a credible, realistic way - and crafted a cruel tale round it. Great job. This deserves a lot more chapters.
I thought it took a while to warm up but it proved to be well worth the read. Its well written and very hot.
Cever premise.
Well crafted.
Would have liked him BEING edged rather than told to edge himself later.