All Comments on 'Teacher's Pets'

The wife is a completely unbelievable caricature, the husband even worse, and the whole story is a farce.

Enjoyed your story on a subject that seems to be happening more and more often. You painted Nancy as a totally messed up bitch. What did Bobby have to make wife, mother, and teacher go completely insane? One thing I thought incongruous, as sbrooks103x pointed out in another story ,was when Chuck told Jenny that Nancy was still her mother. She was planning to drug you and let two men rape you,.but she's still your mother. Right! Also, if my wife told me that she was taking two eighteen year old men on vacation and did not have room for me, there would be blood. Chuck got his revenge nicely and burned the bitch and the dirty boys. Good job.

What an incredibly weak plot and completely unbelievable characters.

Yes, teachers sleep with students and some do crazy shit but there are no economics and maths teachers with an IQ below 70 and the whole story rests on it.

The husband was almost as bad..............ffs man, as if any man would put up with those ridiculous holiday arrangements.

Sorry but it was absolutely awful dross.

1*

Sadly though , I feel this plot is flawed .

I cannot see any husband who is deeply suspicious of his wife's activities with a younger man seemingly shrugging it off until he has more solid proof . His family is already being seriously affected by mum's behaviour , so wouldn't he be trying to check up on where and what is going on , on those evenings when she is late coming home ?

Why has she turned so bitchy ? She seems to want to stay married so why is she so unconcerned about the effects her behaviour is having on her family ?

And as for the vacation ...... he has to stay at home because she doesn't want to disappoint two young men ???

Yes , it gave him the opportunity to get the lowdown , but honestly , would any husband have been cool or calm enough to plan this out ?

It was an entertaining read , enjoyable ....... I just think the plot needed tidying up .

Good work ...... stay with us .

Ya, total fiction and not believable but it was a fun read. "Julie" getting paid over 50 years? Threw me for a sec then I realized its a type and that should be Nancy.

As totally unbelievable as the plot was, variations of this kind of scenario happen all the time in real life. I've seen dozens of news stories about female teachers having affairs with their students, and in some cases they get really obsessed with them.

All common sense was thrown out the window when Nancy started fucking an underage boy. She already risked her career, her marriage, and her freedom, so getting involved with the plot to rape Jenny wasn't that much of a stretch. At that point, Nancy had already betrayed everything she'd ever believed in.

In fact, the only really far-fetched part of this story was the sentencing. Considering how lenient the courts are on women, Nancy would never get 50 years. More like 5-10...

Still it was a great story, and nice to see the evil cunt get destroyed and a happy ending for the husband and his family.

The wife is beyond believable. The husband was too accepting of behavior that screamed red flags, for too long. As others have commented, no husband would let their wife go on holiday with 2 young men and be told they can't go. What fictional place do they live in? You kept saying state and the drinking age is 18. Also the legal punishment seemed off for the sexual relationship with 18 year old. I can see being fired and barred from teaching but not a 20 year sentence for sexual activities with an 18 year old even if they are a student.

Not even a passing attempt at plausibility. 1 star

Drugging the the kids? Mom ok with rape of her 14-yo daughter. WTF?!!!

Would like to know some of how it all transpired. How the fuck did the kid seduce the teacher? More, how did they decide to rape the daughter. How the hell does the mother become ok with that?

For me, since the rape of the daughter (and needing to drug the twins to do so) is so heinous, and none of that is explained, it leaves a big hole in the story.

“Prestigious computer firm specializing in surveillance equipment”. What computer firm does that? What’s his job exactly?

This was a paint by numbers story that requires a suspension of disbelief of epic proportions. It wasn’t even mildly entertaining but rather an exercise in ridiculousness.

People cheat. It doesn’t matter your economic situation or intelligence, just don’t make it so predictable.

Why is he obeying her and not going? Of course, this gives the opportunity for the high-tech gadgetry!

The second story I've seen recently where paid off and cancelled, the right way to do it, not the silly "take his name off the accounts."

"I just got caught up in the moment and, I don't know, it just seemed right at the time." - At what time does setting your own daughter up to be DATE RAPED seem right?

"a few panelists took the position that it shouldn't matter if the students were 18 or over and consented to the relationship." - When a boss seduces an employee, it's sexual harassment even if it's consensual due to the imbalance of power. Same with teacher/student, though I wouldn't be surprised that the seduction went the other direction!

If he unplugged the answering machine, how did he get messages?

He's getting 70-30 of the cash, why 50-50 on the house?

I claim no legal expertise, but her sentence sounds unrealistic. I've seen murderers get less WITH possibility of parole! And, while it's no credit to her, she never did actually drug the kids, and there's no indication that she would be a danger to any other children.

@26thNC, thanks for the shout-out. At least in the usual stories there's no direct threat or harm to the kids, here there was an active plan to harm them, "she's still your mother" rings kind of hollow!

Why is her behaviour so totally over the top? What braught that on? Martian slut ray? Why did Chuck tell this daughter: "she is still your mother"? What kind of mother would plot to drug her kids, to rape her daughter? Why did Chuck hesitate to divorce Nancy even before the showdown, when she put so much disrespect onto her husband and her children? Because of Nancys behaviour her daughter was harassed at school! IMO, her behaviour before the spring break vacation was enough reason for a divorce even without any physical cheating.

The story would have been better with a less exaggerated plot.

It was an OK read. But you really need to get an editor.

Nancy is the wife; Jenny is the daughter, so Who the Fuck is Julie?

"... ordering the settlement money to be placed in a trust. Half would be paid out to Julie over her 50 years in prison" ... An editor would have caught that.

The basics were there and there were similarities in the general story.

The story worked well and was a diversion from my working day. Now, back to writing that bloody report for work!

Chuck uses his 14 year old daughter to get “dirt” on his cheating wife? Then, after learning of his wife’s plans to drug and molest their children he pawns the kids off to a neighbor so the neighbor can comfort his daughter? Chuck will probably end up on a Jerry Springer episode.

Yeah, Chuck’s a real man!

At first I thought that bullshit like this couldn't happen, then I remembered the name Pamela Smart. Good story and 4.4 stars.

Good story. I'm tired of those Literotica stories where the husbands wants to be cuckolded and be dressed in drags, while treated like a pauper in his own home and getting relief by masturbations like a teenager, but she loves him only... A little over the top the way she treats the husband in this story. She sounded more like a trouble-making teenager than a professional adult with children. I guess the group sex with horny teenagers and some PMS-like hormonal overload blocked her from having rational thoughts. The way she acted was like carrying a sign saying, "I'm an unfaithful slut!" I like your stories. Keep writing. Gave you 5*. Thanks.

oops place holder? Did similar on one of mine (no, not here), luckily I forgot to change any of them, so got away with it.

It flabbergasts me that anything would be put in trust for such an evil woman, she should (well all 3 should) be put into hard labour to earn their keep over the next 30-50 years and I've never understood giving sentences to run concurrently, just give her 20 years for both or 10 years each, minor bug of mine.

Overall, similar to others, but written and paced well, cheers.

It always cracks me up when the commentators treat these stories as "real life" events. Good for a laugh. The only thing that bothered me about this story was the length of the sentences for the two boys and his wife. 50 years seemed like overkill for the story line. Still an entertaining read. Thanks for the effort.

I kicked her out before the first page was even half way dry.

I would love to hear Nancy's take on the tryst!......I thought for sure she was going to pull a Clinton""I did not have sex with that Man""...Oh! Well...Such is life.

Thanks for sharing this Fantastic Powerful Story with Us......5.Stars. ★★★★★ WOOF

"She's still your mother, Jen"

I know the "she's a bad wife, but a good mom" line of thinking is often argued by the husbands/fathers in these stories, but this mother was planning to drug her children and set her daughter up to be raped. I think it's okay for the dad to let his daughter think poorly of her.

"Divorce? What for?"

So she intends to go with an insanity defense, eh?

"I don't know if you're aware of it, but her arrest is all over the evening news."

When Bob the Shark isn't patrolling the chum-filled waters of family law, he's the super sentry of society, Captain Obvious!

Even the judge is getting in on the crazy act:

50 year sentence?? For plotting a rape but not yet committing it? Serial rapists don't even get that sort of sentence (though they should.)

You didn't write Nancy as the tearful, apologetic type, so it seemed odd that once it was revealed she was a total psycho, that she would suddenly become one, rather than continue being a remorseless harpy. How was she shrewd enough to get away with it for as long as she did, but she's dumb enough to think she wasn't going to get divorced once caught? 90 percent of husbands would be divorcing her for, in an aggressively rude way, leaving him home alone during the family vacation so she could bring a couple of young studs he was already very suspicious about - let alone having video evidence of her fucking both of them and plotting to help them drug and rape her daughter.

To be honest, I can't see many people buying the "business plan" excuse for more than one or two hangout sessions. It simply wouldn't require that much time from her over so many months to help him put a plan together.

Still, it was mostly a fun read, and one of only a few stories I've read in Loving Wives dealing with this particular topic, and even the wildly unrealistic parts at least got a chuckle out of me.

Thanks for the story.

Cog

Of course these aren't real life events, but it helps with the suspension of disbelief if we can at least PRETEND that they are!

Not since the early 80s. Some states used make the age 18, but a Federal law in 1984 changed that for all states. It's interesting that you got so much right -- such as the prohibition of teachers having sex with a student even if the student is 18 -- but flubbed that.

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As for the rest, you took the "wife is stupid" trope rather far with her amazement that he'd want a divorce. Fucking the two guys was bad enough, but what she planned for her daughter was way beyond, "I got caught up in the moment."

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Hearing from her about why, I'm a bit on the fence. On the one hand, not knowing why does leave the story lacking. On the other hand, it would be hard to come up with an adequate explanation that would make things worse.

So where is the flying saucer? This loyal loving intelligent virtuous wife and mother just turns into a seducing heartless cougar slut? Who is planning the drugged rape of her minor daughter? What happened? When and why did it start? When and how did she become so stupid and arrogant that she thought she could parade as this punk's fuck toy in front of the entire school and no one would notice? Hell, it took her daughter a few days at school to learn the whole story. When and how did this witch lose her soul? That would be interesting. The bulk was just standard BTB moves and techniques.

Kind of harsh on the wife, don't you think? I mean, the 50 years in prison was well earned, but to be put on the child molester list? Oh, horror! How will she ever get a job once she gets out? Oh, right, prostitution. I'm thinking by the time she gets that product to market its going to have considerable shelf wear.

Thanks for the effort. Maybe try for more originality, passion, and full character involvement. The wife's role was mostly as a foil for the husband's machination to catch then destroy her.

Of these women who sleep with students. They live is some crazy world that doesnt fit with our reality. Good story. 5

Female teachers who do this really do start living in a divergent fantasy world, perhaps because the reality is so distant from their previous self-image. The story captured that concept. In all the cases I'm familiar with the students were treated as victims; however, none involved drugs or threats to another family member (interesting subplots, by the way.) None of them involved more than one student. It's surprising how many of the female teachers feel they've found their life's soulmate in the student, even after the carnage. Men teachers rarely see their actions as more than just a sexual tryst--lust, not love.

Liked your STORY. You've got a few commenters saying this is not a believable STORY. Sounds real to me. Just pick up a newspaper. Lots of crazy shit going on out there. Here's how you can make this STORY more plausible...write a part 2 giving the wife's perspective.

5 *s. I enjoyed it.

The jail time would never had happened. Life for having sex with 18 year old boys. Let’s get real here. This story was so obvious. It ran on and on. The husband waited till she decided to take the boys to there vacation cabin and keep him home. And he let it happen. This story is so badly done. The wife, the boys and a dumb husband letting it go so long. Terrible story line.....poorly written ..

...And a nice change from the constant winp cuck rubbish on this site.

I don't quite get all the talk of molestation when the sick bitch was actually conspiring to have her daughter raped or why her husband dutifully obeyed the cheating slut. Nonetheless it was a fun and interesting take.

Thanks for the read. 4*

our laws are weak that way.even pedophilia is considered pretty minor...and rape. my guess is because so many wealthy people like to engage in such horrible activities.

she was pure evil. when he confronted her and asked what she'd do in his shoes...and her answer was to 'burn his ass in a divorce'...but when she did it it was 'no big deal'...that's pure evil. it's a lack of empathy. she views her family as objects to use for her benefit. that's not something anyone would forgive. i'd straight up tell her that if jail hadn't locked you up, i'd lock you up in a remote cabin...eating half a can of dog food and two glasses of water a day for the rest of her days. trying to get her own daughter drugged and raped...sick. she may be crying, but in the old days she'd be lynched by the neighbors. jail protects her.

Darn, why did you have to make him such a weak knee wimp durning the first part of the story? It took him getting banned from his vacation home with his children to finally get him off his butt. This story line has been done numerous times but hey - new story lines are hard to come by.

Sure she is... the wife is in a idiotic Saddletramp1956 story

heartrendering story really good reading,WELL DONE.

Poorly conceived plot for a story line that's been done a thousand times

Infantile dialogue -- people don't talk the way you have them speaking and what you have them saying would be rejected as implausible for a child's first reader

This security expert who can bug his vacation home at a moment's notice doesn't have any surveillance in the main residence?

And Bobby+wife was happening for a long time; Bobby was always visiting, and our hero didn't turn on his (uninstalled) cameras to watch what was going on between them???

Wimp cuck husband lets wife cheat and diss him for months, then suddenly goes Rambo? I call bulls*** on that.

Molest...take advantage...of daughter? How about call it what it really is such rape or sexual assualt?

"She's still your mother." After telling daughter what mommy dearest had planned for daughter??? Bulls*** again. New rule: any writer who uses that idiotic cliche should be banned for 3 months.

Another lame divorce revenge fantasy.

I'm glad the good side won but to call this formulaic would be an unwarranted compliment.

Ive only ever read one other story where the wife plotted against her own daughter, bothbthat one and this one were were over the top but, given the subject matter, it works.

Well written. Keep writing.

This thing was so bitter and exaggerated that it really wasn't worth the 2* I gave it. It also is not worth spending much time on a comment, but I thought that I should register the displeasure I experienced in reading it. Author should spend his time on more reasonable plots that might be more entertaining.

Does that mean that you don't think she deserves divorce/revenge?

Yes a nice fantasy.. But 50 years, not happening.

Since in this case the boys were adults and had graduated already, the charges of sex with a student are hard to prove, and no DA would try.. Jenny was not raped, so the charges are not rape but conspriicay to commit rape and criminal intent. Since Jenny is over 13 the strongest penalties of rape of a child do not apply.

Possession of Escasy first offense will get them 3 months to a year depending on the state. The intent to commit and conspiracy could get them 1-5 years (IF they are convicted). Longest they will get is 5-7...out in 3. More likely is 3 years, out in 2.

Mary Kay Letourneau raped a 12 year old student, got 6 months in jail for 2 counts of felony rape plus no contact until he was 18. she got out raped him again (got pregnant) got 7 years for violating parole... No way Nancy or the boys get more than 5 years. 50 years is a nice fantasy, it dont work that way. Women and girls in the USA are not well protected.. it is a shame, but it is true.

While I agree with most of your comment, they WERE still students. It was during spring break, not after graduation.

BTW, maybe it's different elsewhere, but in my experience Spring Break is a college thing, in high school its just April/spring vacation.

but the way u wrote Nancy or is it Julia anyway u wrote her to be too good to do something like drug her and rape her daughter, i mean maybe if u had some sort of catalyst, got hit in the head, had a stroke that screwed up her mind, or bad reaction to drugs, or something. a bit too far fetched to make it a really good story but i did enjoy it to a point so ty for the read

Keep up the good work.

Not a plausible human interaction to be found, but LW cliches? Much!

Before you start, I KNOW this is fiction!

"A jury Tuesday convicted a Lawrence teenager of first-degree murder in the killing and beheading of a classmate from Lawrence High School in 2016."

He's getting 25 to life with the possibility of parole!

cliches, nonbelievable characters who do nonbelievable things, and of course the wife has to have an IQ of 50 or less and be evil as fuck to boot, cause why have her just be a slut when you can also make her a total fucking psycho. Eh, doesn't matter anyways, every comment I've ever left on a SaddleTramp story gets deleted so it's not like anyone is going to see this.

Great job making her such a nut job. Her shitty and condescending attitude about inviting her lovers then telling him he needed to stay home! First thing I thought he would come back with was You and I sleep in the same bed. How does my being there interfere with where the sleep? That was only one of the two flaws I noticed. The other being how could she possibly believe the kids would be okay with two Senior HS kids being there but not their Dad? The HS guys were to old to play with the boys and no way would a 14yr old girl hang with them, plus they wouldn't want those kids around anyway. They were to hot for teacher!

The two boys were sentenced to 30 years each for their part in the plot against Jenny. Nancy received two 20-year sentences for her relationships -- one sentence for each of the two boys. Those would be served concurrently.

FOR THOSE OF YOU WHO CAN'T ADD: 20 PLUS 20 PLUS 30 = 70 NOT 50

Her sentence was 50 years. Two twenty year sentences to be served concurrently (together), not consecutively means twenty years. That plus the 30 year sentence equals 50 years.

You could’ve added 10 more years And made a story even better

Questions to The author: did. you have Ever contact to a female besides your mother? Your female characters are so fucking unrealistic that reading Ur stuff is Quite emberassing. Are you a 60 Year Old Virgin? Do you get your Ideas for your characters from Porn Movies, i Mean The real Cheap ones, like z Movies? You should Stop jerking off to Porn Movies And get a Girl! And do something about The Plots of your stories, a mother wants to help her Students to rape her daughter ... Yeah right ... If you absolutely have no Talent you should do something to get skill. And get out of The fucking basement, I think The Air is Way to Thin down there! When you read this Bullshit you get feeling The Base for The plot is Based on serious Brain damage ... Like knock knock someone there?

Teaching is a great profession and it is a shame some don't live up to standards imposed when dealing with their job

Good story

I wish your were correct but you are not. My ex as it became known was perfectly willing to leave my two daughters (both under the age of 10) with her boyfriend and eventual husband who she knew was a child molester (his own daughter) while she worked nights. Child Protective Services conducted an investigation, proved the case and I ended up with custody. If he had done anything to them besides the beginning of grooming them I probably wouldn't be here writing this, assuming I was caught and convicted. So things like with the crazy bitch in this story do happen. The ex was such a great mother she didn't even make any attempt acknowledge or attend my youngest daughter's funeral. Signed: BTW

Teachers are always getting caught screwing students. Lately its been female teachers. I only wish the prison sentences were as bad as you imagined!!!

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Even if students are 18, most states have laws against these relationships because the teacher is still in a position of authority over them.

The writing is sloppy, the characters are not credible, any more than the progression of the "intrigue".

Prison sentences do not stand up.

It is good to punish, it must still be consistent

did he have to buy out her equity in the house? Normally the parent retaining custody gets the house untll the kids are 18 at witch time the house is sold and proceeds divided.

I realy would like to know, what the business plan was. Did it include the rape of the daughter?

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Enjoyed the story but on page 2, Chuck checked out of the motel twice!

Pleasem who is JULIE who would get half the money on her release from jail

I can’t see any mother organizing a gang ban* rape of her 14 yr old daughter but it is you story.

Parents and guardians do this way too much.

Also teachers as headlines show

I hope she becomes Bertha's bitch

I thought teachers were supposed to be intelligent,she must have been the exception to the rule.

Just one query, why did Nancy change her name to Julie and then change it back again a little bit later?

Other than that another good one from the saddle.

Good story but doubtful they would be seeing that much time

I worked with a really smart guy .. He is Now in Folsom Prison . He thought his intelligence put him above the Law .. I hope that Bubba is having a Great time with Him ..

Good story that needs and editor to fix continuity issues..like three boys becoming two again, etc.

I enjoyed the story, it was very well written. I just doubt that a woman would get any jail time for having sex with a student, Up here in Vermont women rarely get prison time they either receive very light sentences or just get probation.

Great story loved it.

CHUCK THE WIMP LET HIS SLUT WIFR CARRY ON FOR SO LONG UNTIL HIS DAUGHTER OPENED HER MOUTH - CHUCK THE CUCK....DUMB TRASH LIKE HIM DESERVED TO BE SCREWED OVER

CHUCK WAS NOT A MAN IN THIS MARRIAGE HENCE HIS SLUT TEACHER WIFE WALKED ALL OVER HIM

very good about hoe to handle your wife's adultery

I would have given this a 5 if you hadn’t made the husband so damned stupid and gutless for the first half of the story. I don’t know why authors seem to go way over the top in portraying the husband has stupid.⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Justice! ⭐⭐⭐⭐.5

Husband was a wimp in the first half of the story, 4 stars

Since there's been a lot of stories about teachers having sex with students and almost none of them got 20-30 years...your literary license was a bit over the top. That being said I find it just to put the wife in jail forever. The story was well written. The husband character was way more patient than most men would be. The cheaters were arrogant as usual and the ending was a home run.

The personality jump from happy wife/loving mother to multiple cheating and daughter molester. Too much husband gloating over retribution. Sorry.

I loved the story; it was well written as all of your stories are. The husband did the right thing by protecting his children. Nancy was so stupid by doing what she did, she had to have a screw loose. At any rate the family survived, and Nancy got exactly what she deserved, a lifetime in the slammer. Well Done. 5-Stars.

Another first rate saddletramp story.

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Normally when I read a father say, "She's still your mother." I agree. This time, not so much. I can only view her as dangerously insane.

One of the few stories, where I actually grew to hate the antagonist. Well done!

Nice story. One. Moment: Mrs. Jennings had a couple kids who were friends with Jenny and the twins. There was no further mention of her kids, in the car or at their home, and not one mention of a Mr. Jennings. Not that they were important to the story. Just saying.

Why in these stories does the cuckholed, husband always end up a few months later with a woman who divorced her husband for cheating?.

Not good, in fact rather pathetic for you

CHUCK THE FOREVER CUCK

CHUCK THE CUCK WAS VERY WUICK TO FIND MARILYN.....IF ONLY HE WAS AS QUICK IN DEALING WITH HIS TRASH WIFE

I realize anything can happen in your world…even incredibly STUPID things like this story.

50 years of prison in those charges is just stupid

She wanted to drug you so her teen lovers could fuck you but she's still your mother... Can we please get past this. The answer is your mother is a disgusting whore who wanted to ruin your life and also turn you into a cheap whore just like herself

Sad story! 5 BIG ONES!

Ugh what a pathetic trash of a woman. Doing that to her own daughter?! She deserves to be burnt literally. And the way she responds..."it felt right at the time" uggghh.

Bare bones of this story don’t add up. She deserved jail time but not that much being realistic.

I never found a reasonable explanation of why she did this. I still gave 5 stars because it felt good that she paid for her crimes.

Bill S.

I can understand why she would fall for her students. Over 30 years of teaching I was proposed to by a few students who were damned sexy girls. Some just wanted sex while others wanted a better grade.

When you’re a fat old graybeard young juicy females are a great temptation. Luckily I ever gave in, but the temptation was tremendous. I sometimes fantasize about some of them it I never gave in.

Bill S.

This was a great story and quite a twist with a cheating wife fucking two seniors at the high school she works at. I am sorry to hear that Saddletramp1956 has passed away recently. He was a great writer and I have almost finished reading all of his stories. This one gets five stars as well. ST you will be missed by me and many others. Rest in peace, cowboy.

Her actions make no sense. It's one thing to have a wife that wants to cheat with a student, let alone two at the same time, maybe she's just a slut and got off on the attention. But it's another to have her complicit in a plot to drug her 14-year old daughter and let those two students rape her. That's insane and evil. What the actual fuck? And we get no explanation as to why she would go along with any of this? Yeah, OK, whatever.