All Comments on 'Temporary Girlfriend Ch. 01'

That was a great start to the story. I enjoy how you develop the two characters and hope you continue developing them together. I enjoy the way you write thank you

Great beginning to a promising tale! Impressive in the balance between speed and restraint, in both your writing and their actions. Wow!

Excellent beginning. I'm annoyed that I came across this one the day it posted.. now I have to wait for the rest. That's the only part of this I don't like. Will be interesting to see what "interesting philosophy" Josh has on dating, though i can kind of guess... excellent stuff!

IMHO, Bob is quickly becoming one of my favorite authors on the site. His stories are well thought out and the dialog is "believable". He also usually seems to proofread his stories for obvious mis-spellings that many writers seem to fail to do and that is all to often a very large distraction in a story.

I love the way you introduce your characters. This is a wonderful start to another of your erotic stories. You are the best auther in literotica. I'm looking forward to reading the remaining chapters.

Two comments:

At least it wasn't a 914, which always looked to me like a Dutch canal boat, and...

$80k a year is poverty, eh? A late and hardly lamented presidential candidate was asked what a middle-class income was. Took a while pondering, and in the end answered, '$500K?'. As if.

„… I’m addicted to lattes.“ gets another touch. In german language, the word ‚Latte’ desrcibes - beside it’s real meaning – a very aroused cock, especially in the context ‚Morgenlatte’, that kind that wakes you up sometimes in the morning. Well written nice story.

Very well written and a nice start to a story. I look forward to seeing where it goes.

A very rare and exquisite coming together,