by DDDDave
Glad to see Eric and Donna together.
Loved that Jackie has grown some more since the previous section.
Favorite part was Jackie comparing her enormous breasts to Donna and the description of what she did to Donna's bra.
Hopefully, the mention of the BE cream will come into play (growing Donna perhaps) before you end this story.
Your sex scenes were as hot and descriptive as ever.
And the enjoyment of this story remains high; can't wait for the next part!
ANOTHER FINE STORY. MAYBE IN NEXT ONE JACKIE LOSES CREAM. DONNA AND ERIC'S MOTHER FIND IT.
I must admit I was a bit of a slow starter with this story... (Meaning Chapter 01 - not this one...)
There's no doubting the quality of the writing, but I have absolutely *no* knowledge of the TV series and struggled a little with the characters at first.
But the great storyline (Admittedly helped by just a little Wikipeding & Youtubing) worked its magic and now I'm a die hard fan!
And I have to mention that this part contains one of the hottest scenes *ever!* Jackie's slow, deliberate, mocking destruction of Donna's 38EE bra. Wow!!!!
Jackie has had quite a journey and I'm so glad we were allowed along for the ride!
Thanks!
Great story, but i'm even more happy that you have started writing again. I have missed your story telling!