All Comments on 'The Accidental Gigolo Pt. 01'

Good stile and hot scenes

Can't wait for chapter 2!!!!!!!

Can not wait for the next chapter,to see where this story is going,but I have an idea where

A great story. I read plenty and this one gets me there even after reading 5 other erotic texts. Please write the next instalment soon :)

Excellant. Your sense of humor is outstanding. One of the best written stories I've read in a long time. Keep up the great work.

Great story line Alien! Keep it up! TCO

Thank you for the great read. Keep it up.

Can not wait till chapter 2. Just kept getting better. Great story ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Very hot story, can't wait for the next installment. Thanks!

Well written, I even found a plot! I hope you continue!

Hurry and post the next episodes.

MORE!

Not very often we get to read a story this well put together, we've all been through the awkward teen sexuality thing and I think most of us wish we'd acted more suave and in control than we did... looking forward to more...or at least your next offering A+++

I am both a consumer and a contributing author at this site, and in my humble opinion this is one of the very best tales ever submitted here. It's well conceived, well executed, literate, articulate, humorous, and very, very stylish. The author's command of the English language is superb, and the verbal imagery is exquisite and wickedly, almost Pythonesquely, twisted and funny. The narrator, Terry, even reminds me a little of Yossarian and Humbert Humbert, another couple of sick puppies...my kind of people.

My only complaint is that I found it difficult to concentrate on the eroticism of the story while laughing out loud."Teasing the zucchini" and "Deirdre the weed-whacker", indeed.

Oh, and it's nice to see that someone is familiar with proper grammar and knows the difference between "writhing" and "withering".

I'm so green with envy that I'd like to plant my boot up the author's butt, I mean, "derriere".

I anxiously await the next episode.

Need more!! Please!

Not often you see anything on here with such a wonderful sense of humour displayed. The bits about the mother, grandmother and aunts names for the garden tools is hilarious!! Keep it up - this story is great! And the erotic content is good too - if I could keep the tears of laughter out of my eyes to read it!

As a former teen age boy I can cite unfulfilled crushes on the neighbor ladies. I'm delighted that Terry has solved this problem. Please continue ...

really appreciate the tone of this story, situations emerging instead of the pretense of a real plan. Still another friend of mom left, and the question why she tried to tape them, unanswered. And what about the aunts, there might be a family reunion coming... looking forward to the next chapter!

I love Terry's competent cluelessness! :D

This is one of the best thought out stories I have read in a long time. Great work. Can't wait to read more....

To phrase an appropriate measurement of the Author's ability and story appreciation let me simply and precisely say this and I quote: Jes like dat DarthGator guy below said a huh a huh - although he could have said much more about the Python esks Snake he referred to as an integral segment of the ladies appreciation - plus the fact that snakes do mesmerize don't they - a huh a huh.----------.

Now all seriousness aside, you did real good Author, but now that expectations are higher than a python kite in a tree - please follow through in like fashion - OK?------------.

Thanks Again --- With Very High Regard

I have to agree with everyone and just say I want more. This is excellant writing.

You're showing your talent again - now go back and rewrite "Show Moms" with at least this degree of eroticism or a bit better, a liberal dose of incest there wouldn't be out of line.

I love the way you have developed all the characters in the story. I think you have thought this story through and are giving your all. Would love to read the rest of the story.

You have a real flair for this type of story and your imagination is so ...male. I like it!

Really great story

I rarely read stories longer than three pages. I don't enjoy trying to keep track of multi-part stories because I forget the first parts.

However, I'll watch for your next installment. I think I'll remember this one.

Great start!!! He has to to finish Laura then the other friend of his mother's and then, finally, his mother! Your talent is very apparent and I eagerly await the next 50 or 60 chapters of this highly erotic story. Normally incest is not a normal turn-on for me but you have done such a wonderful job of leading up to it, you CANNOT STOP NOW!!!!!!

Thank you for entertaining me.

A great story, i always love the story of a younger man controlling older women, wheather it's deliberate or not doesn't matter. please continue ASAP.

waiting for the second one here....

This is pretty fucking hilarious. I think you have the Teenage Nothing voice down perfect!

Fuckin aweome, i really can't wait for chapter 2! Any ideas when it'll be posted??...come ON...i need it lol

What a great start to a hopefully even greater story. It developed well and still was very hot. Looking forward to part 2. Don't make us wait too long.

damn, this is HOT, HOT, HOT.

Can't wait for the next installment.

The illustration of Terry's frustration with the lawnmower translating into Mrs Stone's submission was priceless. Now if you don't get that 2nd chapter finished and posted, we your loyal fans are going to transmute into a "hoard of Diedres"(LOL)and come looking for you!

Umm... Could you tell me where I can find him?

But seriously, usually I find first person stories a bit difficult to read. But you've done very well with it. I guess I'm lucky. You've already posted installments 2 & 3 for my reading pleasure.

Hope my pussy holds out!

Jenny

I started reading at 2 am, now its 5 am, I just finished pt 3 with three masturbation sessions, one with all three women. This is a piece of art put together by a genius, I mean what an amazing story line. Major Props!!

I loved every minute of it!<p>

Actually,it seems like quite a plausible series of events, I almost wish I were the narrator!

and so full of fun and humour - hope it continues in the same vein?

Very well written, and love the humor at the end. Looking forward to enjoying the next edition.

Wonderful, whimsical peek into the mind of a high school senior. And his physical accomplishments, too. Oh, to be 18 again with the biggest dick in town!

Nicely done indeed

Excellent story. Without even trying he scored 2 hotties. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

I'm ready for the next part. Anxiously awaiting the next part. Hurry with the next part please. Love this story. Love the women. About to bust a nut here.

What a fucking baws

Too long. Too much of a "lead in" Not worth finishing.

One of the best stories I have ever read on this site, well done.

I'm glad that Terry's control hasn't gone down the Mean, Terrorizing, Completely Domineering Abusive path.

I'm expecting Mom "the Biotch" to get ratted out to her 3 friends and then let'em dominate her, you didn't divulge yet what her motivation was for the tape but that's just plain wrong.

DKP

Great story, got me all excited. Going to read the rest and probably be so excited over them. Loved the characters and the way it is going. Zucchinis are a very versatile vegetable.... lol

Very, very GOOD

I haven't had so much fun in ages - thanks!!

is not erotic

Superb!

It's really awesome!

Considering your comment mentioned in the headline: are you adult? Because this site is for adults only, you know.

This is the first story I have encountered on this site that actually has some decent humor! Thoroughly enjoyed Terry’s mulling over not being suave and dropping a sharp one-liner after Ms Lee’s blowjob. And the “girls” I almost spewed my coffee over my keyboard. And I really love the asides as he learns to deal with a submissive MILF.

Very interesting beginning.

Great fantasy. So far none are married whores!!!

I like your sense of humour, very enjoyable and funny read. Cheers

Of humour and hot sex. Magnifique!

Excellent start to what I think will be a great series. Looking forward to how it plays out. I'm hoping that mum gets her comeuppance from her son and her friends for being such a double bag. BardnotBard

That was well written, thank you.