by MarshAlien
Great. Awesome. Does he start enjoying the younger bodies during the week, and his more experienced women over the weekend? Please, please, please, do me a favor and keep the mother out of his sexual exploits (it seemed like that's your intention, which would be great.)
In the next reunion all the women talk that they have a handsome young lover with a big dick and they don’t know that he is the same lover , and the mother is jealous of her friends, and she want to know who they are, and of course her friends don’t want to tell their names because he is her son. And then she started to be suspicious, why her girlfriends don’t want to tell their names and saw the changes of the behavior of her son and her friends went they are together.
Then out of the marshes came an alien form laughing all the - nah - give it up.<P>
Quality Stickkk & multiple yuuucks mixed in some fine scribing.<P>
You are appreciated - so far - but don't stretch the quality for quantity.<P>
With Very High Regard
Keep 'em cumming!!! Don't make us wait as long for Pt. 03 as you did for 02.
Great!!! Can't wait for more, but please DO NOT involve his mother in this!!!
I love it! Don't wait so long to submit the next chapter. And I agree - keep the mother out of it. Let her friends have the fun, and maybe his aunts too.
Keep up the great work, this was eagerly awaited and didn't disappoint
I haven't even read Chapter 1 yet, but will be looking for it next, believe me. This is delicious.
I agree pls dont involve the mother here if your planning to make another one.
This one great story, it has a certain dreamlike quality about it, what would be a good ending is to have them all pregnant by him, that would be the icing on the cake. love Jemma
Going to have to give my poor pussy a break before I read the third installment. Very good writing. I easily put myself into whichever character he's screwing at the moment. One word of caution, though. Listen to your fans in deciding where to take the story next, but don't write it that way just because that's what they want. Also, be careful of letting the little brain dictate the plot. So far, you've done a 'Hot' job of tying nonconsent, bdsm, and mature into a good little tail. And I actually kind of like his little insecurities. It gives me a glimpse into the mind of my son's friend when we
The sex is wonderful! But I have to admit, the humor is sensational. You really have a future in humor. Or - more accurately, you are already an accomplished humorist......Keep it UP!
I loved every bit of it. But it almost makes me think, that it was Mom's idea for her three friends to land in bed with her son... And, it almost sounds plausible that they [might] all 3 gangbang Terry... maybe :)
and the humour just makes it so funny and enjoyable with a bit of sex on the side - so to speak - has kept me laughing all the way through. Well done
Great story you've written. It's fun and imaginative. I'm also enjoying the fact that I don't have to interpret what you meant to say due to misspelled words, or grammatical errors.
Coming up with fucking gods and what not, you 'sir' are a 'fucking genius'
Love your writing style...irreverent humor...your story!
Love your writing style...irreverent humor...your story!
This story was farking amazing. I really liked the way the bitches got theirs, can't wait for the mom to get speared cos that 's what she needs. Your writing is really good, entrancing!
Seriously? Yikes.
Sizzler's is a giant red flag of "no-go", either side.
I keep hearing a late-teen male voice doing voice-overs. Time for the Literotica channel.
that a human being is capable of producing such divergent and interesting scenes along with such clever dialog. And it just goes on and on, paragraph after paragraph, and page after page.
I don't get the "Gigolo," though. No money has changed hands.
So obvious I shouldn't have to say it. OK, I will. 5 stars.
Paul in Oklahoma
This is actually a funny story, good dialog and an interesting story line. Well done.
It's a weird, yet not unpleasant sensation, laughing uproariously while completely hard. That's a new one for me, so thanks.