All Comments on 'The Accidental Gigolo Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Very Hot

Good writing am enjoying the story, keep them coming, thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Very good

Good writing ,keep them coming

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Love it

Next the mother.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Awesome

Great. Awesome. Does he start enjoying the younger bodies during the week, and his more experienced women over the weekend? Please, please, please, do me a favor and keep the mother out of his sexual exploits (it seemed like that's your intention, which would be great.)

saronbcsaronbcabout 17 years ago
Reunion II

In the next reunion all the women talk that they have a handsome young lover with a big dick and they don’t know that he is the same lover , and the mother is jealous of her friends, and she want to know who they are, and of course her friends don’t want to tell their names because he is her son. And then she started to be suspicious, why her girlfriends don’t want to tell their names and saw the changes of the behavior of her son and her friends went they are together.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
hot

love this story please keep it going

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Sparklingly Amusing & Arousing & ---

Then out of the marshes came an alien form laughing all the - nah - give it up.<P>

Quality Stickkk & multiple yuuucks mixed in some fine scribing.<P>

You are appreciated - so far - but don't stretch the quality for quantity.<P>

With Very High Regard

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
More much more

Keep 'em cumming!!! Don't make us wait as long for Pt. 03 as you did for 02.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Fantastic!

Great!!! Can't wait for more, but please DO NOT involve his mother in this!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Very inviting!

I love it! Don't wait so long to submit the next chapter. And I agree - keep the mother out of it. Let her friends have the fun, and maybe his aunts too.

mtstorymtstoryabout 17 years ago
Love it

You did a great job in tieing the plots together.

Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Brilliant!

Keep up the great work, this was eagerly awaited and didn't disappoint

SweetLittleLiarSweetLittleLiarabout 17 years ago
SUCH strong writing, and hot hot HOT sex!

I haven't even read Chapter 1 yet, but will be looking for it next, believe me. This is delicious.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Hot

I agree pls dont involve the mother here if your planning to make another one.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Accidental Daddy?

This one great story, it has a certain dreamlike quality about it, what would be a good ending is to have them all pregnant by him, that would be the icing on the cake. love Jemma

JRavenJRavenalmost 17 years ago
Oh my!

Going to have to give my poor pussy a break before I read the third installment. Very good writing. I easily put myself into whichever character he's screwing at the moment. One word of caution, though. Listen to your fans in deciding where to take the story next, but don't write it that way just because that's what they want. Also, be careful of letting the little brain dictate the plot. So far, you've done a 'Hot' job of tying nonconsent, bdsm, and mature into a good little tail. And I actually kind of like his little insecurities. It gives me a glimpse into the mind of my son's friend when we

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
High Humor

The sex is wonderful! But I have to admit, the humor is sensational. You really have a future in humor. Or - more accurately, you are already an accomplished humorist......Keep it UP!

jacks4ujacks4uover 14 years ago
way kule!

I loved every bit of it. But it almost makes me think, that it was Mom's idea for her three friends to land in bed with her son... And, it almost sounds plausible that they [might] all 3 gangbang Terry... maybe :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Loved it

and the humour just makes it so funny and enjoyable with a bit of sex on the side - so to speak - has kept me laughing all the way through. Well done

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
GLAD TO CONTINUE THE STORY!

Great story you've written. It's fun and imaginative. I'm also enjoying the fact that I don't have to interpret what you meant to say due to misspelled words, or grammatical errors.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Sweet cheese-ass this guy is awesome.

Dubby49Dubby49about 11 years ago
Freddie Roosevelt !

ROTFLMAO

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
8~)

DKP

hopelessly_otakuhopelessly_otakuover 10 years ago
Brilliant

Coming up with fucking gods and what not, you 'sir' are a 'fucking genius'

arrowglassarrowglassover 9 years ago
Thank the gods for accidents!

Love your writing style...irreverent humor...your story!

arrowglassarrowglassover 9 years ago
Thank the gods for accidents!

Love your writing style...irreverent humor...your story!

gondaolgondaolover 9 years ago
So far..

So GREAT

rightbankrightbankalmost 9 years ago
My biggest fear?

his mother is next

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

I wish you'd write more. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Tingling Sensations

This story was farking amazing. I really liked the way the bitches got theirs, can't wait for the mom to get speared cos that 's what she needs. Your writing is really good, entrancing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Sizzler's???

Seriously? Yikes.

Sizzler's is a giant red flag of "no-go", either side.

loragassloragassover 6 years ago
Oh Wow

I cant wait!

FoggyKernelFoggyKernelover 5 years ago
Oh, this is too good

I keep hearing a late-teen male voice doing voice-overs. Time for the Literotica channel.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
HARD TO BELIEVE

that a human being is capable of producing such divergent and interesting scenes along with such clever dialog. And it just goes on and on, paragraph after paragraph, and page after page.

I don't get the "Gigolo," though. No money has changed hands.

So obvious I shouldn't have to say it. OK, I will. 5 stars.

Paul in Oklahoma

Grimjack01Grimjack01over 4 years ago
Funny and interesting at the same time

This is actually a funny story, good dialog and an interesting story line. Well done.

MarkT63MarkT63about 3 years ago

Natalie had a great revenge fuck!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
Weird

It's a weird, yet not unpleasant sensation, laughing uproariously while completely hard. That's a new one for me, so thanks.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Excellent story full of humour and hot sex. BardnotBard

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