All Comments on 'The Alphabet Story'

by velvet hammer

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txcoatl1970txcoatl1970about 11 years ago

I loved the story. The sex was hot, and you made Sheila into a fun character. I liked the wistfulness to the whole scene.

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggabout 11 years ago
A Rare Borderline Wistful/ Lustful Nuance to be Admired !

The only off-putting part was the setting of San Francisco circa early 80's which was ground zero for the you-know-what epidemic. Since this is fiction, it would have been a nice touch for the author to relate running into Sheila at 70+ . Good story with welcomed dollops of tenderness and humor.

kyron99kyron99almost 10 years ago
5-star

Such a wonderful story, full of both perverted hot sex, but also the nostalgia of young, innocent, passionate yearning. Reminds me of my own sweet memories while giving me yours. Thank you.

chytownchytownover 7 years ago
Good Read***

Thanks for sharing.

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