All Comments on 'The Anunnaki'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

An excellent start, believable dialogue and a credible MC.

Looking forward to reading more.

5*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Okay you got my attention. Now let's see how you do in trying to keep it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Really a well done beginning and the responses from the governments and the “scholars” is completely believable. I can also understand why Max would feel like he does in that situation. I anxiously await your next chapter which hopefully will be just as well made. Good job so far!

J.D.

brian473317brian473317about 3 years agoAuthor

Thank you for reading and enjoying this story.

Vic6930Vic6930about 3 years ago

Great storie. Love to see more chapters in the future. Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

hehehehe

"We took a few of them captive and found, much to our surprise, that we shared a common ancestry. Their base DNA pattern was almost identical to ours. We tried some simple experiments and discovered that we could splice our own DNA onto theirs."

Craig Venter and Francis Collins look at each other, and smile....

arrowglassarrowglassabout 3 years ago
This story reminds me of one I read awhile ago...almost exactly the same!

Is this a re-issue of a previous story under another name?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Great story.....or is it? I believe Anunnaki are very much real and will be back soon 😎👽

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Loved it. A shame it will be piece by piece.

brian473317brian473317about 3 years agoAuthor

Feel free to contact me if you have questions or comments about this or any of my other stories.

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1058701&page=contact

Diecast1Diecast1about 3 years ago

there has to be more chapters. AAA+++

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