All Comments on 'The Branson Family Pt. 01'

Racist

Engaging story and excited to see what happens next!

Very good start and I’m ready for more.

The beginning was pretty good, but part one needs to be longer. That being said, I’m a sucker for blackmail stories and can’t wait for more!

I hope the hubby or even better the son gets turned and sucks the big black dick

Nicely done! You've built a very good foundation and left the reader's imagination wanting more! Awesome!

Sweatermeat1, Wow your story is a great beginning got me hooked.

You are a devious little thing, aren't you? :) A little surprised that Lindsey is going to submit to Darius on such a little thing, but that's the point, isn't it - an innocent wife not realizing just how bad things can go? Good start.

My first time reading this author! Have just finished the Branson’s what a great read! A really , really good author. In stage 4 hoping for more course language. Instead of so much pussy words there should be now so much cunt words please. I love dirty talk at its best!