All Comments on 'The Business Trip'

or you deserve the slings and arrows of criticism.

you write well. and certainly write what makes you hot. just don't try to be less than forthright with your audience.

Show, don't tell.

Pretty easy to guess the plot and it could have been an interesting read but between spelling and grammatical errors it was tiresome. Also, spell check can't tell you that it should be three not there (during the training meeting). Find a friend who did more than pass high school English.