All Comments on 'The Cancelled Flight'

You've grown from the useless husband stories and now write with more humor and more interesting points of view.

How in God's name do you write so much?

A friend of mine had a similar story except he had to jump out of a second story window. The hubby broke his leg when he went out the same window after him!

You never know who going to meet.

Boyd

This was a fun story! Nice job!

Original plot and improved writing made this an enjoyable read.

...much. And eating another man's stuff out of his Wife/Girlfriend did give me a few dry heaves. But I have to admit I did get a good laugh at the end.

Way better than normal, but still gave me the "Ewww's" at times (^_^)

Nice approach and a good story. Thanks

Funny and interesting plot. Keep up the good work.

I too worked in an office with 70 or so women, and four other guys, and you're not wrong about how they can tease and torment a single guy.

Although i didn't get lucky with any of them, (Not for the want of trying).

when reading it, it could so easily have been part of my real life.

Story does not seem quite finished, therefore I cannot give you an outstanding grade. Is there more?

A good one Bob real good

At least you didn't have to eat cold cum. Besides, sex is sex, and that is what you were there for. And if you suck a cock the cum tastes a lot better.

Your recent trend of stories with variety of POV and less predictable plots is welcome. Thank you!

luckily, the husband didn't have a gun, or the story would end in the snow

With any luck, he will beat Lana to death, dispose of her body and seek you out. Hopefully he will hang you in a tree and skin you alive. Die, you sorry motherfucker. but ever so slowly!

be able to outrun him but those god damned shotgun pellets in the ass are a motherfucker!!!! lol

Merry Christmas Everyone

drivel drivel dribel ... you can do better

I thought it was a lot of fun. I wonder if any of his parts got frostbitten???

This was a srange story with no redeeming quality whatsoever.

that was 3 thoughts. TK U MLJ LV NV

slowed him down enough that the husband caught and beat the living shit out of him.

Really strange that his longer stories are above average, but most of his one and two page ones should earn negative stars. Do everyone a favor JPB, stop submitting this shit and post what you are capable of writing.

I really liked it. 5*

Needs finishing,another story left up in the air.

Seems like you don't know how to finish a story. 2*

Has no ideas / imagination in the feeble grey matter on how the tale ends.

It's your choice anon, the author planted the seeds you gotta help. After all, it's your entertainment.

A JPB story that I haven't read before. I join the majority in hoping Lana's husband catches him.

Yet another drivel about sucking other men's cum. Add JPB obsession with anal sex, general hatred for women, and you can figure out what is the sexual orientation of JPB.

Garbage,how can he lick a woman out every night for two months?.Was she abnormal and never had a period.?

You bothered to write all that and not finish it. What a waste of time!

Whether people like it or not things like this happen. Many years ago while working in a warehouse a colleague would sometimes be sick or something. It turned out that he was visiting some of the wives of his work mates who he knew were at work. Unfortunately for him one of his colleagues was taken ill and had to go home. His jumping out of a second floor window was not good for his leg although he did get away. It is surprising how adrenaline over comes pain. Hope he is still enjoying life as I am now 74 years old.

Stupid Chinese writer! Churns out shot stories by the dustbin load…mediocre and uninspiring !!