All Comments on 'The Challenge Ch. 07: Fernanda's Turn'

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FoggyKernelFoggyKernelabout 5 years ago
ugh

That was painful. Way too controlling. Poor kid.

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aover 2 years ago

This was nothing ore than revenge sex and probably rape. This is an example of the worst type of incestuous relationship-positional powerplay. No intimacy nor passion for the son from his mother.

Motherlessone77Motherlessone77over 2 years ago

It's not that I didn't enjoy the story. I just thought of this woman "Fernanda" a soulless and vile person through out most your stories. But it was because she used other guys to fill in for her Dad, I get it. All in all I enjoy your works. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Needed a better ending, preferably one that involved her finally being intimate with her father after which she changed and apologized to her son, and sister, for being so controlling and demanding. Also, interested in whether or not 'Bob' found out about her new relationship with her father and was given a bonus because of it.

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