All Comments on 'The Construction Worker'

I guess well over 90% of the stories on here are exactly that. But to engage the reader there has to some sense of reality when we're reading it - and there just wasn't any.

OKAY...Have you NEVER heard of tension? Or plausibility? Why do you think DC Comics made kryptonite debilitating to Superman? Well...forget kryptonite plausibility!

Don't give up. Try, try again.

I liked this obvious fantasy story and I do not understand why some who read stories like this have to trash the author. My guess is that the most vitriolic critiques come from people who have never written a single story. Not sure what kind of thrill they get out of trashing the author. I like this one and hope to see more stories from this writer.

You decide to write a sexy story, but you are incompetent. This silly horseshoe is the best you could come up with. You are very ashamed of this garbage as you should be.