by TemptedOne
Even though you always write about the same subject you know how to make each time different and not get trapped in a formula. Great job!
That was a really enjoyable story T one. The best I have read on this site for a long time. I notice you have one other story but in view of the well written piece you;ve obviously written a lot before. Where can I find your works ?
I'm a huge fan of this type of story and this is one of the best, seriously scorching!
Good God....this genre rocks,and you just made the top 5. Great job.
Reminds me of a psyco I hooked up with a few years ago while on Temporary Duty with the military! I loved the story as I often fatasize about my psyco while I'm with my wife. I can relate! Thanks, and Good Story!
Well written, though the climax and end were too short. The delayed submission adds to the story. Great job.
very hot! one of my favourite story. please write more with the same theme as this one
One of my favorites. I've read this one a few times, and i can't get enough of it. This is a story that should be considered for a short film. Anyways, please entertain us with another story just like this one, or give us a part 2.
Marry the crazy woman? Did she boil the bunny? You're nuts. Sickening story.
So absurd that its funny, I loled at the guys proposal, anyways it's a shame you don't write anymore cuz this is HOT
That was the ending you came up with? Right up there with the worst decisions - EVER! Can I vote "zero"?
I loved the ending it was foreseen if you paid attention for the people who said the ending was horrible
MMMMMMM the plot (what there was of it) was much to quick it all happened to soon , she should have taken longer doing the dirty, taken more fun in the dead, made more of the wife friendship etc.
Which Veronica clearly is. It makes absolutely no sense. And no woman, bat shit crazy or not, wants another woman's ring. No way, no how. Absolutely stupid story.
A fantasy does not have to be realistic. It's a fantasy. And I assume you're a woman, aren't you? You clearly don't understand what a femme fatale is and that a lot of men are just simply vulnerable, dreaming of being wrapped around a finger like that, enslaved emotionally (kinda similar to subby men fantasising about being servants 24/7 and of being humiliated, although they'd never allow it IRL)
Very well written and I believe this story may have been based upon actual events. Oh to be the target of a cougar.
Ticklishsoles
I remember one like this only longer and with the psycho getting in the wife’s wedding dress.
This story has divided opinions on content but why don't you write numbers?
Can you not spell two or three and have to write 2 of us or 3 of us?
If you're going to write then write.