by Joanmcarthy
Wonderful story telling by a wonderful writer. This chapter is sweet, tender, moving, with excellent characters and a plot that briskly moves without ever being superficial. It is much more of a romance story than an erotic couplings story, and is a joy to read. The descriptive love scenes are beautifully written, and the chapter has a romantic aura about it that is truly marvelous. This is definitely a story that needs to be continued.