All Comments on 'The Discovery Club Ch. 01'

One of the best stories I've read here in a while. I really enjoy your build up of the story, great writing, obviously edit or have someone edit. Kudos. And the patience you write with adds to the story all around.

Thanks!!

story, i will be looking out for the next instalment with eagre antic87EDipation

My apologies for not labelling this story as Chapter 1; it seems I left a few people upset with the "to be continued" at the end, without giving them warning. I've submitted a revision to correct this matter, as well as a few of the grammatical/spelling errors that slipped through my proofing. Thanks again for reading. Hikergirl

Sounds Great,

I'd love to see the next part

Great beginning. Wonderful build up. I hope there's more to this story.

Take it wherever you will, but please write more of this story!

Please