All Comments on 'The Edge of Intention'

I do hope this is not considered a finished story. Please continue.

I really hope you actually are a woman. This site needs more female writers who know how to write (and at least know what a bra size is!). I loved the story, very sexy without sex. Erotica is not porn. Very refreshing. I will find your blog.

Good morning to the commenters of my story. I am a female writer. This is Part 1 of the story. For some reason that did not make it into the title....Part 2 is coming and has been submitted. I'm glad you all enjoyed it. I do know how to write and just got done with a 484 page book called Defiance. I am a statement analyst and use that skill to build characters in my stories.This way, there won't be people saying things that are hard to believe other than the fact that it is fiction.

... looking forward to the next chapter :)

All Sara needed was to have someone in life who she can rely on if need be. She already has the hots for him. She has already forgiven him the first spanking (after which she was not psychologically damaged).

Thank you for this story!

I have spanking stories.

very nice! Kudos to you and thanks. Looking forward to the rest...take care and write well.