All Comments on 'The Escort Ch. 15-16'

by bunny3374

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Lappes up her jucies

My dog lappes water. What erotic phrasing.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
keep up the good work!

this was very good! i really enjoyed it! that other person that commented, didnt know what they were talking about. i thought it was great! and there's nothing wrong with "lapped up her juices"! That's very creative writing and i say it aptly describes the way Antonio licked her fluids from her skin. well written, Bunny!

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