by bunny3374
My dog lappes water. What erotic phrasing.
You want nothing but public comments, you get comments that would have been private and without a score.
this was very good! i really enjoyed it! that other person that commented, didnt know what they were talking about. i thought it was great! and there's nothing wrong with "lapped up her juices"! That's very creative writing and i say it aptly describes the way Antonio licked her fluids from her skin. well written, Bunny!