All Comments on 'The Experiment'

I love the way you've shown the emotional involvement and conflicts, which makes the characters more real, and (for me) makes the story more erotic.

Nice job! You’ve woven a tale that is as old as the ages and as fresh as today. Believable characters and situations and a nice buildup before the explosive climax.

Five stars in my book.

I'm glad you both find this not just believable but erotic as well. This was my first attempt at writing about swingers, and I'm glad I got it right! It's always my desire to make the characters AND the situations real!

Your story is amazing. I'm just wondering what happened next? Did Anna find out or did that weekend end all contact with Beth for Dev? We need answers Please!!!!!

Your enthusiasm is very heartening! Thank you! I have been wondering what happens next with them, too! :) I have another project working on, but as soon as it is squared away, I promise to return with the rest of this tale!

I apologize...it's lovebug96! I'm not normally dyslexic! :)

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