All Comments on 'The Filly & The Stud Ch. 03'

I really, really loved your stories. Why? ummmmm...I like the passion, dominance, and protectiveness of the male characters combined with their inner or rarely unmasked insecurities.

Your writing is awesome & fluid. Generally, very 3D - you write about how things are perceived to all 5 senses of your characters.

It boggles my mind how so many skilled writers (technically & creatively) end up with lopsided and odd stories b/c they forget to describe sights, colors, tastes, and other sensory info that bring a character to life.

I thoroughly enjoyed this series. You did an excellent job of showing their relationship change and progress. And the sex was so hot!

Why mention the cards he left and not describe what's on them? Why did David make the trip to see Jason? I'm clueless.

Finally, an erotic love story without a major, past event that keeps the major characters from falling in love. I liked it so much, I am going to read another one.