All Comments on 'The Flight of the Old Grouch'

This is the best of the best. I was getting horny just reading it.

WOW!

A little on the longish side on flying terminology, but very interesting to read. I couldn't help but wonder if she was going to propose to you of maybe starting a family?

Hey, great story. Let's have some more!!!

Another good story by you. You hit the ground running.

Boyd

I don't know much about fishing, especially fish like tarpon, permit and some of the others mentioned that we don't have in Australian waters. We may well call them by different names. There is some great trout fishing in the highland lakes in Tasmania where I live and being an island state there is salt water fishing all around.

Aeroplanes are much more my line having been an aircraft maintenance engineer and love old aircraft, especially amphibious ones. So I loved the aircraft terminology.

The romance and caring in the story also hit a chord with me and all in all the whole story gave me great pleasure, Thank you

Grey Eagle:

You've done yourself proud with this story. It's got it all and it's well done. Thank You. Ronnie W.

This is one of your better ones.

One of the best I have read. Sure made this old fart feel young and virile again. Don't lose the touch!!

Doesn't that just about say it all? Thanks for the story.

Five Stars for sure!

I love a real romantic love story. Don't have to be full of sex, but love.

That was a real fun one -

The people were all good no real melodrama to cloud things up just people doing what people do -

Of course they all had way too much disposable income LOL but OK -

Really, a striptease among friends?

I have known ex strippers that have put on a show for there friends. Hell I was even married to one it happens in real yes it do.

Could have been a great story but the writing was just too mechanical and cold. The intercourse (not sexual) between the characters didn't flow with a warmth and feeling.