All Comments on 'The Happy Father'

Marisha/Marina? Otherwise an average story.

Nice but an average story. AAA++

"Nice but an average story. AAA++"

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If it's an average story but it rates AAA++, what could you possibly rate a well above average story? Just typing more +s doesn't really make sense. By definition, an average story is a C (aka a 3).

The story is not well done. I would normally make a statement of lacking polish but it's absurd how you failed to follow your own story. Pulled off her belt freeing a medium size. Horrible. Total destroys the readers engagement with a story that isn't just some jerk of fantasy of moment.