All Comments on 'The Hard Body Clerk's New Beginning Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Hot Hot Hot

Wonderful initial submission of Cori's new beginning. May this series run a long long time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Wicked Awesome!

Great new story for Cori. I'm a little sad that she didn't stay at THBS, hopefully the guys will come visit here in San Diego!!!

jamesn100jamesn100about 10 years ago

i liked this, it was a good that Cori was treated more like a "slut"

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My stories generally feature exhibitionism and/or non-violent non-consent such as blackmail. I appreciate all feedback, both positive and negative, as I'm always looking to improve my writing. I also welcome feedback and suggestions for story ideas at dlsloan31@gmail.com.