All Comments on 'The Hotel Tryst'

Now you've got me hooked. I need to know about the burglary and what happens from here on in. Please expand the story, even if you have to go into other than erotic details. :-)

Great job. You've got a 100 from me.

Fantastic tale. Im looking forward to Daniel living out his fantasy in part 2.

Fantastic!!! I've been reading stories on literotica.com for years. Best story I've read yet!

Flawless :)

simply amazing!

Great story, don't stop now.

Funny that Richard Gere and Julia Roberts were mentioned. Like a pornogrphic Pretty Woman is a good description!

One of the best stories I have ever read. Unlike most, I do not think you need to continue it. When you create a great work of art, don't feel the need to tamper with it. You obviously have great talent, and so are capable of cranking out other very successfull stories.

Oh my god..you cant leave me hanging like this....what happened in the robbery?..Do they make it...Do they live happily ever after?

I wont be able to sleep now...Im a woman...I need to know NOW..lol

Great story...please finish it..

L..

corny, maybe but an excellant piece of writting. keep up the excellant work!!!

Perfection, with a chaotic twist

Seven pages.....SEVEN PAGES and I STILL couldn't stop till I finished reading one helluva story!! I think a lot of readers would've hunted you down if these two characters didn't end up together! Great storyline, delicious female lead(who can resist a hot young blonde?) plenty of humor and a romantic tone that had me rooting for them the whole time. I think this story stands alone but if you write another part to it I'll be glued to the screen once again. Thanks for an excellent read!!

All of your stories I have read have been, simply put, extraordinary. You have a great nac for character building, as well as building tension between those characters, sexually, physically, or mentally, and relieving the tension.

You are definately one of my favorite authors, if not the most. I urge you to keep writing, mostly for my sake, but also for the others who also understand and realise how exceptional your work really is.

Thanks.

Once again you demonstrated yuorself a terrific writer; i can't help myself from reading your stories...

Again and again, you prove your writing ability. Keep it up and hopefully you'll write more :D

I don't know if you're tired of hearing this or not, but I just wanted to let you know that your writing is excellent. Being an aspring writer myself, it's good to see people who can come up with excellent pieces of writing, and stun their audience with each new piece of work.

Keep up the good work.

I enjoy the way you write but you lost me when you made him a thief.A cute twist but I liked the mystery of him better.

it seems that every story you write is pure gold. please continue writing like this, it would be a crime if wou didnot.

I love stories where the sex has lots of affection and love. And, Nikki is such an adorable and affectionate woman!

Another GREAT romance from a fine writer! RED HOT SEX, nearly life-threatening in intensity, builds to love and gentle soul mingling within hours. This you should expect from a successful, hypersexy man of mystery and a first-class hooker whose deep capacity for tender, caring love, slyly sweet good humor, and thoughtfulness shine through her work (no snickering, guys). A couple of quibbles should be noted; Michelangelo's Creation, e.g., adorns the ceiling, NOT the roof, of the Sistine Chapel. The heart of it is that both are profoundly sad and lonely souls behind their masks. But Nikki is so wonderful that she probably CAN be his salvation, his Lady in Shining Armor. This is a tantalizing tale, and I LOVE it.

I'm floored and awed... you're very skilled, and your work is beautiful. I can only aspire to write as well as you!

You held my interest all the way through with the gradual revealing of Daniel's background. The chemistry between Nikki and Daniel was so real and exciting. I just wish that I could meet someone like Nikki and have half as much pleasure as they both enjoyed. Keep writing, please.

I really enjoyed reading this story. The sex was steamy and believable, the dialogue was engaging and interesting and the plot was consistent and well thought out. Well done. One of my favorites

Cracking little story that - plus it's got scope for wider exploration.

I really enjoyed this story. I didn't think I would when I started but I read it anyway because I have enjoyed all of your stories that I have read.

I think a sequel to this story is in order about the diamond heist they are planning.

It would be a little different from your other stories but could help you grow as an author.

wonderful story boat how you described old physical also the mental issues that both characters would dealing withthe only sexual the missing was analhave read a number of your stories and again good job keep writing

You have several in my top 50 list. I know you don't write for here any more. But wanted to at least post a thank you.

Such an interesting storyline, full of intrigue and mystery. The story really is at a point where it is just getting interesting, do they pull off the diamond heist successfully and where do they go next. With law in several countries looking for Daniel where can they go to have that happily ever after, or do they even want that. At an rate this is a first class story and deserves an ending what ever that may be. Gets my 5 star vote

Hope Stefan sees this - most erotic lovemaking scene on Literotica.

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I really liked your story and its characters but was distracted early on with doubts about a couple things and whether I could trust you to navigate competently through the world you are describing:

You wrote, “…he desperately hoped that she was on the pill because the quantity of sperm he'd shot into her was enough to make her pregnant five times over.” That’s just silly. Although an abundance of sperm cells in an ejaculate in needed to offset the inevitability that some will not enter the cervix at all and half of those will go up the wrong Fallopian (the one without an egg waiting in it) and to provide an encircling army to surround the egg, each contributing a bit of enzyme to weaken its outer defenses, if there happened to be five ova waiting (fertility drugs can produce such an outcome), it is only the additional four encircling contingents that would need to be provided, a mere fraction of the normal number launched with the fluids from the prostate and other contributors to the seminal soup. Spermatozoa make 1% or less of the total mass and volume. Those who claim they can feel it bubbling out of the balls are deluded—if pleasantly.

Also Flash Gordon was not a superhero (maybe you meant The Flash?) but a “spaceman” contemporary of Buck Rogers, long before Star Trek made to TV screens or even TVs made it into people’s homes.

I am barely half way through and think this is one of best works I have read herr