by papaya_lynne
Papaya-Lynne, you are so incredibly good at evoking that intense sexual tension that is the essense of a great story, (or movie,) and then the explosive release of that tension. You make it so realistic and believable, in keeping with the character's personality, that I find myself yearning for a continuation of the situation. Like give us some warm afterglow and cuddling, then, since the immediate edge is off with the first intense coupling, maybe now a long, slow delicious sensual buid-up to most of a night's worth of joyous lusty pleasuring?
God, keep writing, girl, but give us a night's worth of a chapter, not just a page-ful quick come, please?
great to have a story from a women's perspective! And a very genuine one too...
That is exactly what I need right now... Time to go find the fiancé... THANK YOU PAPAYA-LYNNE!
I am nearly speechless....you captured the theme of this story so intensely....I'm almost embarrassed to say it made me cry, because my husband travels for work and is only home about once every 3-4 weeks. This is how I feel when I get him alone for the first time when he's here; there's a sort of trepidation, despite the fact that we've been married 13 years. And that hunger...I can relate to that so deeply. Thank you for an AMAZING story!!!