All Comments on 'The Intruder'

Love this story. Love picturing how far it can go

Fan of your work but this one doesn’t really seem very unique. Im hoping you eventually write a story where the husband’s mother is the instigator of his wife’s cuckolding. It’s an underutilized gimmick in the genre. Your work has some of the best over-the-top verbal humiliation.

Great story. Love the simple short sentence describing his quick jerk off, cumming in his palm while Mark ravages his wife’s cunt..the mental humiliation at the end is perfect too. Just because he married this woman, he’s lost everything. I’m in the same situation. But when I think of what she’s been able to do to me, how I’ve lost everything because of her my cock gets so unbelievably hard..

JT

This could play out a lot of different ways. Chapter 2 please!

Love it! I like the cruelty of it all, Mark taking Heidi away from Alan and Heidi being all for it